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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. NICCSACC

    NICCSACC Banned

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    nice mabye add more flair to your letters and bunch them up a little tighter together ya dig. other than that its clean as hell guy!
     
  2. nerdx

    nerdx Elite Member

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    thanks yo. was tryin to get the oldschool feel to it by keepin it pretty simple.
    im not sure if i achieved that or not. but whatever. not too happy with it overall.
     
  3. NICCSACC

    NICCSACC Banned

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    yeah. the heart attachment on the "I" is a classic. just make the letters a little thicker basically. squeeze them together more thats about it other than that its fresh.
     
  4. MF Feed Letter

    MF Feed Letter Senior Member

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  5. SeKz

    SeKz Senior Member

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    Tight shit MF your letters really work together. Something i still need to get the hang of.
     
  6. N:Craze

    N:Craze Senior Member

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  7. myl

    myl Elite Member

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    mino?

    go keep your letters all the same width for now and dont make the letters like chopped up how they are in fragments
     
  8. N:Craze

    N:Craze Senior Member

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    aight i can live with that i wanted to try somethin i hadnt done before thanks for the input.
     
  9. myl

    myl Elite Member

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    yeah im tryin to help..im gettin real tired i just reread what i posted and i put "go keep"

    i dont even know why...it doesnt make sense to me

    im out

    goodnight all
     
  10. sky 5

    sky 5 Elite Member

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    yeah MF has a real nice flow b/c he repeats certain lines/angles/movements that look good . . .look at the top right lop of the P, e, R there all the same which gives you that consistent the-man-knows-what-hes-doin style . . . what works for one letter should work for other letters of similar structure . . . . .z z z z z z z
     
  11. meetermaid

    meetermaid Elite Member

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    i agree with you on the width bit, but disagree on the fragmented bit...the appeal of those letters IS the fact that they're all like chopped up. (i just really like that style so i suppose i'm biased, whatever..) but otherwise mino the colours look real nice, and i like the brown inverse-highlights.
     
  12. doomsayer

    doomsayer Elite Member

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    crits? i like this one better than the other one i was working on, its sort of a new addon i addes to it kinda. what do u think? its a bit messy, if i did it proper the letters wud be cleaned up, but do u think with cleaner letters this wud be better than my other thro?

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  13. DeathRow

    DeathRow Senior Member

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    Yeah ok thanx, i sure as hell didnt bite..
     
  14. doomsayer

    doomsayer Elite Member

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    crits? i like this one better than the other one i was working on, its sort of a new addon i addes to it kinda. what do u think? its a bit messy, if i did it proper the letters wud be cleaned up, but do u think with cleaner letters this wud be better than my other thro?

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  15. MEBone

    MEBone Senior Member

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    the style is lookin nice, but itd be nice to see a cleaner one sumtime, remember that each middle lione of the h's and the t's shud end at the same point
     
  16. MEBone

    MEBone Senior Member

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  17. doomsayer

    doomsayer Elite Member

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    clean one comin up!
     
  18. levans

    levans Senior Member

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    mebone i rekon you could work on your letter structure a little before you waist time using markers or paint or pencil and your fill. maybe use addons and your letters dont need to be so thin and yeh basically its alright just work on your letters
     
  19. MEBone

    MEBone Senior Member

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    thnx...yah the markers r those gay ass ones that smell like stuff. im drunk and sotle them from some first graders
     
  20. krazzie_ammo

    krazzie_ammo Senior Member

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