craze,your on the right path.but ya don't need the bits comin out of your simples.keep at em son

 

which bits do you mean?

 

The top blue one is quite good.

If I was you on the 'C' make the bottom bit fatter so the line is even with top line of the 'E' and 'Z'.

Your 'a' looks like a 'g'. Maybe change it to this sort of 'a', with the line at the top.

Also mark the 'hole' in the 'a' so that the 'C' doesn't look like an 'e'.

I think that it has a bit of a potential that sketch.

 

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i think thats what hes tlakin bout

 

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dont look at the r, itll burn ur eyes. i fucked that r so bad damn watever im drunk and dont feel like sleepin. wat yall think of that visual narcotics shit

 

thanks MEBone, d_g and krash!

MEBone, with the 'R' try and make the bottom part come out from the vertical line instead of from the semi-circle.
If that doesn' make sense that tell me and i will try and explain it differently

 

ya it makes sense, i fucked it up real bad so it dont look like it supposed to

 

What do you think?

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truth that throw is gettin dope it has nice flow..

craze.. haha i used to write that. the blue throw type think add the holes to the a and r and see what that looks like but i like that one a bunch i think it just needs a little more someting ...its your job to see what that is. aalso maybe tryin the e lowercase.

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bes one... loose the pencil forcefield also loose all the connectors especialy from the s to the b and the arrow going down off the s and the arrow on the b if you loose the arrow on the e i like that e along with the s

summary:
try those letters again : make them thisker and loose all extensions.

 

bes one...block letters buddy, just go back to block letters. you can just start off doin wildstyles and shit without doing blocks first



check out this 2 letter throwie i came up with though

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bring the middle 2 lines of the s down some to match the height of the line in the e also i would makethe humps a bit smaller its too big on the e maybe try to throw in a ! to tie it together ?

put a dropshadow on it too that may help

 

i miss the niccsacc flix

 

dont write SE, its the most played out two letter bomb ever.

 

lose the points on top it looks horrible. no offence.

 

drew this up today during first day of school...boring day

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just goofin around. doesnt mean anything..

-d

 

Messed up the R but ah well

 

pretty cool!!

 

That's pretty sweet but where's the A?

 

I dont really like A's that much, i leave it out sometimes