nosy your sig is from pendulum awsome (;

feed, that first piece is clean as fuck, put it up

 

thanks nosey didnt think you were still on this forum

an reg i woulda given you vritz but my computers slow as fuck so it didnt show up but i can see it now and the only thing i dont really liek is that l and somethin bout the t

im gona try in paper piece battle this week to

 

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ya one of mybetter pieces i kno im toy but i would like some crits.... i never get any ...
so plz crit and aanyone in the 512 area pm me

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ya i ilek this one the best cir.t.s....

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i love prismas : )

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CRITS PLEASE DAMN

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Could some body give me some feedback before i paint this by thursday thx.

 

your letter structure is horrible son

go back to blocks cause you have no clue what youre doing

 

new throw idea (btw i know my shadow is really horrible)
crits?
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dont bother painting it, if thats the best or some of ur good stuff and its only on paper im pretty sure that ur piece is gonna look worse.
loose all the extensions and crap and work on ur letters

minesweep do another becuase i cant tell what it says

 

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Working on simples. I'm not too fond of the 'e'.

What's wrong with it/what needs changing? Should I move on? What should I do next?....Usual questions.

Oh, and excuse my pen control, I'm pretty terrible working on a small scale.

 

make it uppercase, everything else looks like it is so the e shud be as well, the t isnt as wide as everything else but otherwise its pretty good

 

after you do what he said, bend the letters some and make them overlap just a little

 

my advice:
dont paint this. Dont waste the paint, dont waste your time, tdont waste the space.

Retract yoourself frm your currently style which is basically horrible letter styles with tone of flashy addons that dont work, and go back to drawing simple letters like the guy above this

 

Oh yeah, I didn't notice the 'T'. I rushed it cause it's a pretty simple letter so that's probably why.


Thanks guys.

 

I think you should make the letters thinner, cause i find it easir to tweak thinner letters, what i did was i wrote my name out in the font IMPACT in word, then printed it out and traced it then worked off it from there just addin little extension and stuff on the letters.

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crrits>?

 

Cheers.

I usually do them skinnier, just doing them big and fat this time.

I'll have a look at that impact font.

 

yeah heres my progression, first is font, second is trace and tweak, third is just freehand.
still working on it
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Bump yo, i need to know if im doin this shit right. Gimme some

truth im diggin your handstyle man

 

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sekz, id give ya crits, but im not adnvanced enough IMO, from what I can see its lookin great, but yeah, lose the arrows and maybe derfine the Z more, but yea, idno, im not good enough to be able to tell ya know

yeah crits please somebody

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That handstyle is rockin. I'm not feeling the throw at all the t's really look like j's and that u looks more like a c idk just try some other stuff with the throw but your handstyle looks hella good