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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Nosypainter

    Nosypainter Elite Member

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    shrugs i like it and im not talking about the s in the one wit the bear
     
  2. BoRe-719-

    BoRe-719- Elite Member

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    nosy your sig is from pendulum awsome (;

    feed, that first piece is clean as fuck, put it up
     
  3. MF Feed Letter

    MF Feed Letter Senior Member

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    thanks nosey didnt think you were still on this forum

    an reg i woulda given you vritz but my computers slow as fuck so it didnt show up but i can see it now and the only thing i dont really liek is that l and somethin bout the t

    im gona try in paper piece battle this week to
     
  4. emel

    emel Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/9186/latestrelapsiv9.jpg

    ya one of mybetter pieces i kno im toy but i would like some crits.... i never get any ...
    so plz crit and aanyone in the 512 area pm me

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    ya i ilek this one the best cir.t.s....

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    i love prismas : )

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    CRITS PLEASE DAMN

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  5. Flash_One

    Flash_One Elite Member

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  6. myl

    myl Elite Member

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    your letter structure is horrible son

    go back to blocks cause you have no clue what youre doing
     
  7. minesweep

    minesweep Elite Member

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  8. NOMX

    NOMX Elite Member

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    dont bother painting it, if thats the best or some of ur good stuff and its only on paper im pretty sure that ur piece is gonna look worse.
    loose all the extensions and crap and work on ur letters

    minesweep do another becuase i cant tell what it says
     
  9. d_g

    d_g Elite Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/3840/560a0418je0.jpg

    Working on simples. I'm not too fond of the 'e'.

    What's wrong with it/what needs changing? Should I move on? What should I do next?....Usual questions.

    Oh, and excuse my pen control, I'm pretty terrible working on a small scale.
     
  10. MEBone

    MEBone Senior Member

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    make it uppercase, everything else looks like it is so the e shud be as well, the t isnt as wide as everything else but otherwise its pretty good
     
  11. Runit One

    Runit One New Member

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    after you do what he said, bend the letters some and make them overlap just a little
     
  12. koper

    koper Banned

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    my advice:
    dont paint this. Dont waste the paint, dont waste your time, tdont waste the space.

    Retract yoourself frm your currently style which is basically horrible letter styles with tone of flashy addons that dont work, and go back to drawing simple letters like the guy above this
     
  13. d_g

    d_g Elite Member

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    Oh yeah, I didn't notice the 'T'. I rushed it cause it's a pretty simple letter so that's probably why.


    Thanks guys.
     
  14. doomsayer

    doomsayer Elite Member

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    I think you should make the letters thinner, cause i find it easir to tweak thinner letters, what i did was i wrote my name out in the font IMPACT in word, then printed it out and traced it then worked off it from there just addin little extension and stuff on the letters.

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    crrits>?
     
  15. d_g

    d_g Elite Member

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    Cheers.

    I usually do them skinnier, just doing them big and fat this time.

    I'll have a look at that impact font.
     
  16. doomsayer

    doomsayer Elite Member

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    yeah heres my progression, first is font, second is trace and tweak, third is just freehand.
    still working on it
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  17. SeKz

    SeKz Senior Member

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  18. wrek10

    wrek10 Senior Member

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  19. doomsayer

    doomsayer Elite Member

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    sekz, id give ya crits, but im not adnvanced enough IMO, from what I can see its lookin great, but yeah, lose the arrows and maybe derfine the Z more, but yea, idno, im not good enough to be able to tell ya know

    yeah crits please somebody

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  20. wordzcantexpress

    wordzcantexpress Senior Member

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    That handstyle is rockin. I'm not feeling the throw at all the t's really look like j's and that u looks more like a c idk just try some other stuff with the throw but your handstyle looks hella good