yeh fill is pretty sweet what kind of markers did u use

 

I have been writing for about a week or so now, and i wanted to post my first attempt at a 3d-ish sketch.

I know that the angle isn't quite consistant from left to right(the a leans more than the k). What do you think? I was gonna add more of a background, but wanted to see what you all thought first. I know I am a toy and just getting started, but any comments will help a lot.

 

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Yeah did these... not that great but yeah.. crits welcomed..

SUP SEKZ, nice shitt there fella..

peace

 

posca paint markers

100th Post :lol:

 

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Is it JAR now? If so I'd say lower the left part of the J just to make it a little more J like. It's sweet. Would be a nice quick bomb. The shadow looks a little too think on the R in the middle. Also hy didn't you move it more to the left so it doesn't go onto the next page and you could still get something on the other page.

 

thats fucking dope, love it.

 

I suck at upper case A's

 

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new bomb any constructive Critz?

 

apoc that is prrropa nice except the a is weird

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never really tried to make the 3D look nice before, its horrible because i cant blend felt tips.. i dont like my style

 

i like it emokid i like the colors. props.

 

Aone was a old school Bronx legend. Rip Aone... so change

 

It's nice but you shouldn't end your letters in an arrow

 

your letters arent bad. its the positioning thats fucked. keep em all the same size and dont make it smaller and overlapping one part like that..just maintain regular throwup style with those letters and it should be good.

 

my first ever sketch! im such a retarded toy...

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Aone was a old school Bronx legend. Rip Aone... so change [/b][/quote]
4 reasons why I don't care about your opinion -

1. I don't live in the bronx, or paris.

2. I've been writing aoner for over a year now, i've gotten ups with decent heads, no one cares.

3. Hes dead... people will know i'm not him

4. I don't know you

 

your a bit smug

 

I dont appreciate people tellin me to change my name. I'll change it when I feel like it. And he didn't say it in a very nice way. And by the way you joined like, a month before me and you have 1100 posts vs 313? Man get off the internet

 

I dont think your opnion matters at all considering your sketches are horrible and have no flow.