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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. ARMAwonR

    ARMAwonR Senior Member

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    ohh yes ... its a very awesome sketch :)
     
  2. jonowev

    jonowev Senior Member

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  3. aces

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  4. phish

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  5. PeYGoNeR

    PeYGoNeR Senior Member

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    aces its looking good im not really feeling the conected lines on the letters and phish i like that the shading looks good.peace.
     
  6. jonowev

    jonowev Senior Member

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    yeah phish the shading looks good, but i think the 's' is just a little bit squashed, other than that nicely done :)
     
  7. jonowev

    jonowev Senior Member

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    ai110.photobucket.com_albums_n88_jonowev_JONsketch.jpg
    crits please?
    (sorry to keep posting, but i want opinions)
     
  8. WolfBurrns

    WolfBurrns Senior Member

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    Dont use pen. Use pencil so you can erase your mistakes. And start with block letters. It's all about structure. All your letters aren't proportional with it's parts. Example, the left side of your 'N' is fatter than the right side. The 'J' is the same way and the 'O' has no structure either. Just go with simple shit.
     
  9. jonowev

    jonowev Senior Member

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    what do you mean by no structure on the 'O'?
     
  10. Apoc

    Apoc Elite Member

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    the pointy thing on the right side of th O is bad
     
  11. 5yn

    5yn Senior Member

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    ai46.photobucket.com_albums_f124_5yn_Picture28.jpg
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    some are old but any crits?
     
  12. phish

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  13. jonowev

    jonowev Senior Member

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    the bottom one is cool, but dont like the green around the edge.
    i see what you mean about the thing sticking out of the 'o' - its baaaaaad
     
  14. jonowev

    jonowev Senior Member

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    ive tried shit like that ^^^^ and want to move on to slightly more interesting stuff.
    thanx for the lil drawing tho :D
    any tips on where to go from block letters?
     
  15. WolfBurrns

    WolfBurrns Senior Member

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    By the way, is Jon your real name? If it is, I suggest you dont use it.
     
  16. jonowev

    jonowev Senior Member

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    no its not my real name. and its not my tag name. i write 'JAY' as my tag, but when i practice at home and in class on paper, i write 'JON' coz its short for my real name. i write 'JON' as a decoy name really, for the stuff i want people to see.
     
  17. some guy from NCI...

    some guy from NCI... Elite Member

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  18. Bartic

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  19. jonowev

    jonowev Senior Member

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    lol, i sense the sarcasm!

    its common sense tho really! i write 'JON' all over my schoolbooks and crap, and have a secret sketch book where i do my 'JAY' sketches.
     
  20. some guy from NCI...

    some guy from NCI... Elite Member

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    slow down a bit more...

    go to simples... getting your simples good is harder than you'd expect.