[Broken External Image]:http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5861/v018pk6.jpg Latest sketch crits please
i dontl ike the way that the 's' is smaller than all the others - kinda unbalances it otherwise i like it muchly
you seem to have got the block letters spot on, phish. try something a little more interesting now the 'new2graf' topic is very helpful if you want to evolve your style
thas deeeeeeeeep!!!! It looks to me like you're goin in the right direction. Paint some of those... but big... reaaaal big.
after some simples i tried some bubbles (for the crew) [Broken External Image]:http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/9193/krimsuk8.jpg The R is ugly in the first one, the line is to thick The K and R are fucked in the 2nd i don't really like those, but maybe you have some advise for me? To make these throwies better
Looks good. Dont worry about the "doo-dads"(as Seen would say) just yet. Drop shadows look good too. Now dont go crazy trying shit because you got your blcoks down. Start adding curves to your letters and progress like that. Like this, [Broken External Image]:http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/smbu1.jpg to this [Broken External Image]:http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/bs.jpg It's subtle, but you can see the curve differance form the first piece to the second.
Hes not doing "crazy shit" and your example dosnt even mak sense it dosnt even demonstrate your point, dont use ur own sketches because they are wack, at least refer him to the new 2 graff thread.
Phish's stuff is better. Even with the dodads. Phish: just keep on practicing it'll just happen Capo: Lose the backgrounds
Really simple, but I want some advice on my bubble style [Broken External Image]:http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/9205/krimmb0.jpg
EDIT:::::::: THis was to the guy who asked about his bubble style (last page) sorry to say it but it sucks... look at phishs stuff and try out letters like his (straight edge) curvy edges are difficult to do well when you first start out, it's hard to keep the letter width the same.
sekz i love your style the only thing i would change on this would be the extension under the e like someone already mentioned, and possible make the s just little bit bigger.
Looks good. Dont worry about the "doo-dads"(as Seen would say) just yet. Drop shadows look good too. Now dont go crazy trying shit because you got your blcoks down. Start adding curves to your letters and progress like that. Like this, [Broken External Image]:http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/smbu1.jpg to this [Broken External Image]:http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/bs.jpg It's subtle, but you can see the curve differance form the first piece to the second. [/b][/quote] lollllllllllllllll :lol: