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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Code

    Code Senior Member

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    Skribble- I like the character, but as for the piece i dont know, it seems kind of messy, for example some of the extensions are kind of random, and the letter structure aint that good. But for the other pieces they are dope lovin the 3d Lol but i am just a toy so that just my oppinion.

    Phish- I like the extension on the "P", but the "H" doesent seem to appeal to me.

    Sole- its okay, but i dont like the "S" that much, good simple though.

    Like i said guys i am probaly one of the biggest toyes as you about to see with this sketch, but i am just passing on advice people have given me.

    [Broken External Image]:http://img435.imageshack.us/img435/5213/scan0001yh9.jpg

    critz please
     
  2. Skesh

    Skesh Elite Member

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    bump

    I was first

    i want some comment on these

    am I going into the right direction? and do you have tips to make it more interesting?
     
  3. jonowev

    jonowev Senior Member

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  4. Code

    Code Senior Member

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    Hey, ty for the crit.

    So now it my turn, I really lovin the simple would make a sick roller, but for some reason the "Y" just seems not to go with the flow. Not sure why but it doesent seem to go with the other 2 letters.
     
  5. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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  6. terower

    terower Senior Member

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    JAY - looking good, that 3D's pretty well done. The Y is still a little off, though. I think it would look tight if you kept the tail of the y on the same level as the bottom of the J and A and not have it dip down like it is. Also, make sure all the lines stay at an even thickness.

    KRIM - looking pretty good, that camo fill is pretty nice. My only suggestion is to bring the I over to the right a bit more, so it stands out better from the R and M.

    Now my turn. I did this a week ago instead of paying attention in Calculus... I always feel like I draw my best when I'm doodling in class. I'm pretty proud of the police officer, but I also liked the old men on right, which came about by me trying to draw without lifting the pen from the paper.

    ai61.photobucket.com_albums_h56_terower_Photo70.jpg

    Comments? Opinions?
     
  7. T_R_O_N

    T_R_O_N Senior Member

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    Sum: dope character for sure, but try not to add to many ruffles in the clothes, your giving way to much emphasis on baggyness.
     
  8. terower

    terower Senior Member

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    Sum, the character is decent, but it definitely needs some work. The arms and legs are too short in comparison to the torso and head. Also, you went a little overboard with the crease lines. If you work on those, it could be pretty dope.
     
  9. aha

    aha Senior Member

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  10. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    the 3d is off and the T is a little awkward, other than that pretty good
     
  11. aha

    aha Senior Member

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    ,
     
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  12. Flash

    Flash Senior Member

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    post the image
     
  13. ~raging babies~

    ~raging babies~ Member

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  14. WolfBurrns

    WolfBurrns Senior Member

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    rasta- Its okay. Needs alot of work. Make your letters evenly spaced. For instance the first a is hidden a bit too much. Your letters need more structure too. Take your time as well. No need to rush through your throws. I can see your trying to rush it, like your doing it on a wall. Try to master each letter first and then put them together and see what you come up with.
     
  15. ~raging babies~

    ~raging babies~ Member

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  16. -testify-

    -testify- Senior Member

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  17. Bastardo

    Bastardo Senior Member

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    its the same pic as that other guys? :huh:
    EDIT. NVM you are the same person?
     
  18. ~raging babies~

    ~raging babies~ Member

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    no hes just my frend(not the one who spammed) and i coppied his code by accident also im on his username right now so this is testify crits?
     
  19. Hilo

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  20. -testify-

    -testify- Senior Member

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    i like the face haha whats the third letter though EDIT nvm