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i dono about this style i think i jus need to fix it up?

 

Yo, Hare, i really do like the fill but the letters need to be defined a little more, in my opinion. I really cant even read what it says


Ok, here i lost the arrows and tried to go simpler, added a better fill to flare the piece up a bit, so what do you all think? Oh and ignore tag, i know its pretty danm bad i really got to work on it, but if you want to give me critz on tag go for it

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Critz please

 

says ja...not that ahrd to read

 

code, next time do a simple fill. the green band across it doesnt look that great. also, you chopped off half the C! the A and the N are looking much better tho

 

YarHar, thas looking awesome. not feeling the fill, but the stars and the actual letter shapes are minted

 

lol oops, sorry there ya, now that i look at it closer it does say JA, lol so ignore what i said, about the letter structure. Really really dope fill though i still think

 

thank you for the crit! , and when you say simple fill do you mean like a one color fill?

 

yeah, just keep it simple and contrast the outlines with the fill. when youre ready, maybe try doing a fade (one coour at the top, one at the bottom, and merge them together in the middle using extreme subtlety)

 

lol, i know i am about to sound like the biggest toy, but what do you mean when you say "contrast the outlines with the fill"?

 

Theres already a really famous JA. A legend even. Just so you know.

 

well, make one colour compliment the other. use colours that stand out against each other, like blue and yellow
or red and black

 

crits please and JA chill on the fill man your destracting the letters

 

MF baby, im still calling you MF i dont acare bout the jame change, i like the letters, fill, everythings gravy these cats dont know what theyre saying

im just not feelin the middle little bar of the A, seems sloppy

and hielo thats arlight for a simle my man, itd look cool painted big


heres a little sketch for a possibly GRADE TWELVE font for the yearbook, crits?

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fill and stars is awesome... letters suck.

 

nice Megadeth reference, peace sells is a rad song. Did u go to the gigantour 2006? [/b][/quote]
nah couldnt even get there due to car trouble ya dig. i bet that shit was dope tho.

 

odd stuff but i like it kinda. looks like an eclipse or something (as far as the yellow fades/flare goes.)

 

Theres already a really famous JA. A legend even. Just so you know. [/b][/quote]
your a moron

 

haha

 

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