The holes in the P and A are really big. And the top part of the K, the part that sticks out, it looks off.
Well that's my 2 cents. Work on those along with whatever anyone else tells you.

 

ok thanks

 

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what should i do to it?

 

define the C a little more.
looks like a C but also somewhat like a weird S, i like it though

 

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done this for a battle on another forum

 

give this girly some critz ^^, yeah i havent posted much latly cause of my court fines and such but i finally got a little time..


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NEMZ is a girl, or were you referring to yourself nosy?

Anyways, Nosy, your stuff is pretty nice.

 

ask ur mum how much of a fuckin girl i am nosy.

 

i was refering to myself and thanks im working on some styles and trying to improve

 

ok for one i was refering to myself being a girl not you you have nothing to do with anything i typed on my post so before you cop a fucking attitude get your fucking facts straight..... k thnx goodbye not meaning to be a bitch but jeez

 

ite well my bad, but u cant blame me for thinkin it, wasnt the only person who thought u ment me.

 

btw your picture owns

 

Bump!, critz please

 

crrits please

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its quite a cool design, but the lines are quite wobbly. looks live your hand was shaking all over the place when you drew it - especailly on the pink outline

 

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oh, thats the paper, its like drawing on styrofoam, like it has these weird line things through it, it's not my hand....

 

bumpin this from otha page for criticizzles

i like it truth, likin the highlites and lowlites lol. u sud try paintin it

 

yeah im real keen to paint it, i got no paint tho, i gotta get me some paint,l yours is lookin real nice, the Y seems a bit out of wehack tho, i think u shud make the space at the top of it a little wider

 

truth - make the horizontal part of the T flat before you consider painting it. it just looks messy

nemzone - the letters are quite nice, but the colours that you used (green n brown) make me want to wretch! :wacko: