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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. nemzone

    nemzone Elite Member

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  2. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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    bump these

    Nemz they look solid. That second one looks good like a fusion of your new style and your older style. The O in Razmo looks a little small though
     
  3. furious

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    bouncer your first one looks reallll clean, like the outline alot. second one looks like "kneis" fatten the lower leg on the k a little.

    nemz the second one is real hot, give it a nice little fill it'll look good
     
  4. ras

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  5. krazzie_ammo

    krazzie_ammo Senior Member

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    nah not really, i normally watch tv or something whilst doing it...ive only done 2 pages.

    nemz you crazy mofo, they are brilliant!

    dub - try doing them all in upper or lower case. keep them the same height :)
     
  6. YarHarHar

    YarHarHar Senior Member

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    bumpppppppp

    nems i liked the sit you posted when ou first started posting

    ras i can only make out the d...the other letters are kinda wack..kinda really wack
     
  7. Code

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    YarHarHar= I really like it, but not feelin the R kind of hard to make out, but the fill is dope

    Ras= Work on that letter structure, as soon as you nail that you will be gold :), also the B is a bit wierd, dont really like it


    Bump critz please
     
  8. bouncingsoul

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  9. furious

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    bumpsta didnt breally get any crits on this. ill post a new sketch later
    but tell me what you think of this one

    jar, PLEEEEASE make that r look more like an r, it REALLY looks like a p and sorta ruins the piece for me. otherwise i think its reallly sick.
     
  10. nemzone

    nemzone Elite Member

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    jar i love it m8, i can see it easily cuz i no wat im lookin for, but if i never new wat it said id have a lil trouble. tho i always love ur flicks. n thanx for every1s comments, bottom one seems to be the best one out of my 2 lol :D
     
  11. Code

    Code Senior Member

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    Furious= danm very nice, but like i said dont hide that P show it :) If you can perfect that style you will be gold :)

    Soul= Man that outline is so danm complex so i am going to go with fucking amazing, but in my oppinion maybe specify your letters more :)


    Lol sorry to ask but may i get a crit on my stuff :) , In that sketch i tryed to improve the shadow so how did i do :)
     
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  15. Code

    Code Senior Member

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    ThickGravy= I like it, really simple, but you got to work on the S doesent go with the flow, and keep all your letters all the same size.

    Ras= I like it better than some of your other pieces, but your B is still a little wierd. But either way nice job.

    Guys if your going to post a pic please crit the people above you just makes sense :)
     
  16. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    good start but lose the arrows and make your letters all the same size.
     
  17. d_g

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    i like it its nice and simple.
     
  19. krazzie_ammo

    krazzie_ammo Senior Member

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    dub - the black fill kinda hids the structure of the letters.

    Musterd -im loving the simplicity :)
     
  20. Syren

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    u no i should stop getting kicked off the blackbook forums and just start posting here anyway :p do u think doin some simples for a while will help my lettering?