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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. slEEt

    slEEt Elite Member

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  2. near

    near Senior Member

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    do i get the end of the page again?

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  3. --SORE--

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  4. Fube

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    SORE : keep workin on structure, try some blockbusters, your letters lack consistancy(spelling) your in the same boat as me. your s has to meny extentions, your o could be mistaken for an a, and your R needs some help, it looks like its in a O&E sandwitch. but i do like the e.


    ok now that i gave crit, i need some :rolleyes:

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  5. furious

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    NUM- really feelin that, give it a dropshadow and an outline, lose the character it makes you look toy, your letters have way more potenial than your characters.

    FUBE- if it says mower, i really like your letters. line em up better next time, guess you ran out of room. your handstyle needs work though.

    somethin i cooked up this afternoon, criticism would be appreciated:
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    think i got the end of the page so expect a bump hah
     
  6. Fube

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    close it says tower. guess i did come down a bit far with the t, and yes i ran out of space.
     
  7. furious

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    well i like your w and r, dont bend the sides of the t down so much, obviously i think it looks like an m hah.

    bumpers; page ended. i want some critssszszsss
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  8. Apoc Dozer

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  9. NiL

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    bumpsta didnt breally get any crits on this. ill post a new sketch later
    but tell me what you think of this one

    jar, PLEEEEASE make that r look more like an r, it REALLY looks like a p and sorta ruins the piece for me. otherwise i think its reallly sick. [/b][/quote]
    Yeah like an 'R' see your piece of shit R?
     
  10. furious

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    lets see some of your flicks NiL, im not one to beef but put up or shut up faggot
     
  11. FEN the HEN

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    BAPER that looks good i like it, and NIL ya, shut the fuck up
     
  12. Fube

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    Baper, 2 nice throwies. i would like to see them in some paint. :)

    ai42.photobucket.com_albums_e336_notvdoctor_baper_blue.jpg

    to me all of these letters match well. but your p is kinda smushed.

    ai42.photobucket.com_albums_e336_notvdoctor_baper_brown.jpg

    i like this one a lot more then the blue one. evenly spaced. and all and all i think its a great throw up. the only thing i would change is the thickness of the cross mark on the A, i would make it a touch thinner.
     
  13. ras

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    Is the name Kep or Kept taken ? ...becuz i was thinkin off changing to that.... ;)

    apoc dozer....i love the colours on it and the simplicity...

    oh i just found on artcrimes that Kept is taken....how about Kep ?
     
  14. entropy

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    ai125.photobucket.com_albums_p73_nasica22_firstpage_Sli.jpg

    Page One of my first ever blackbook.
    Been lurking for a while, working on simples (still there)
    Any crits ?
     
  15. d_g

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    For one you could say that's not technically a black book because bb's are generally sketch books, but whatever, I'm just picky.

    I wouldn't call that a simple either.

    Try writing your name on MSWord in a font called Impact (arial will work too if you don't have impact for some reason).

    Then copy that out, freehand, in pencil, not coloring or 3D or anything at the moment, it's just a waste of your time and money.

    Do that about 100 times then come back for more advice :p
     
  16. LOER1

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    baper- shits ill bro, i like it way better then the one in the blue
     
  17. entropy

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    Basically what i have done is started with an S in block letters, then overlapped then added some curves.
    I have books full of sketches and letter studies, the thing is ive never been a good artist, so i dont even really know if what im doing is on the right track.

    Thankyou for your comments though, they are appreciated and will be followed (this is the first piece i have ever coloured, and i went through a metalic purple doing it).
    But could i ask, please for some constructive critism, as i feel like i dont know where im going wrong and if i go back to the simples again, i will end up in the same spot i am now, with no more knowledge of where ive gone wrong.... or even right for that matter.

    Thanks again
    Entropy

    PS, it was cut out of an exercise book post-scanning and glued on the first page of my blackbook (sketch pad) as it is the first coloured piece i have ever done, and even if it is bad, it will serve as a good before/after comparision once i reach the final page.
     
  18. nemzone

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    yeh baper i love that style m8! keep it up
     
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  20. sky 5

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    bumpage for my man . . nemz most of them pics aint showing up . . :angry: in a coupel days my boy goes back east and ill get crakin on them stickers . . blap blap blap!