god dammit!! they work on my comp <_< u talkin bout stickers for our trade? cuz u never pm'd me back lol does tht thro say noes?? i dno what to say, not gr8 wiv throws reli, just try make the letters all one piece and maybe make only 1 or 2 have seperations to them. hard to explain, but the S has 2 many bits to it in mu opinion
yeah nemz them pics do show up, my dial up is just so damn slow . . (yeah i got dial up, you pay your own way and see how fast you be movin on the internet before you talk ish) . . . near . . .i like your posts man, Ns are a bitch, i would probaly shot eh bottom part of the E out more to the right so it goes past the end of the top part of the E, and Ive never been a fan of the concave(?) legs of Rs . .. too hurt and probaly givin wrong advice so ill STFU! . . i messed up and feel a double post coming . . .
ahh there it is and how inkbits last post didnt get bumped a billioin times but everyone finds time to bump their own 5 second attempts lookin for crtis is beyond me . . . didint people use to bump hot shit 6 months ago? now it seems everyone bumps their own playin it off like they want crits . . damn i be a bitter herb sometimes ..
dont do throws at all (why when you can just rock a quick straight letter?) but you got the left/back lean going nice for each letter so maybe try having all your letters leaning forward (whcih should help the O) for a diff throw, maybe learn alil sumthin . . probaly shouldnt have some lettters leanin forward and others back on the same throw but if you work it right who knows . . .
bouncingsoul - you are close to turnin the corner and advancing a step b/c you have a consistent approach and style to the way you lay down your letters and you do A to Z but in my opinion you should try to dress up your letters alil, maybe add some definitive sharp angles in there or something to contrast the soft rounded feel you got now . . . quick head high sketch tryin to follow your last few letters if you dont mind me following your letters . . . the E on the EW is a bummer, an easy one is what i d did below still in your style but the top and bottom legs pinch towards the middle with the bottom leg of the E shootin out farther than the top right of the E . . . [Broken External Image]:http://img480.imageshack.us/img480/7100/1202020am0.jpg edit: the bottom of your E where it shhots directly right looks alot better than my curved . .
Iv decided to change my name to Kep....i dont think its taken...say so if it is [Broken External Image]:http://img468.imageshack.us/img468/7460/kepxx2.jpg startin of " simple " Crits crits crits thank's ....
Ras= I like the one that is nice and simple, the shadow is a little off, but either way nice , and your other more complex sketches are hot to, but you got to work on that throw Sleet= Keep working on it, try to add some style to that throw it you will be gold if you get it right K here may i get some critz on how my shadow is set up and over all sketch, going to pick up some nice Big stickers so trying to improve a bit more
Summet New... [Broken External Image]:http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/8664/kep2fu8.jpg crits and comments
Ras= I like the one that is nice and simple, the shadow is a little off, but either way nice , and your other more complex sketches are hot to, but you got to work on that throw Sleet= Keep working on it, try to add some style to that throw it you will be gold if you get it right K here may i get some critz on how my shadow is set up and over all sketch, going to pick up some nice Big stickers so trying to improve a bit more [/b][/quote] Bump, sorry got the last page Ras- I aint feelin the letter structure man, and some of the 3d is a little wierd
kkkkkkk ill go back to simples ... i was trying to experiment but i diddnt pull it off lol... :blink:
critszo kepsta i like the straight letter but theres too much space between the k and e or somethin, other piece is sorta whack though stay simple baby opinions?