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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. CoKKeYONe

    CoKKeYONe Senior Member

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    ^looks good but it begs for some color
     
  2. Nosypainter

    Nosypainter Elite Member

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  3. Yusef245

    Yusef245 Member

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    nemz- lovin the blue 3d and the green fill on the other piece but the red is distracting for me. maybe a more subtle or calmer color for the background would suit it better.

    cold- keep working. work on the 3d on the M but overall pretty good.

    sear- like it alot. very clean and the vanishing 3d is nice. the A is the best letter in my opinion, good shit
     
  4. ASB_ONE

    ASB_ONE Senior Member

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  5. -testify-

    -testify- Senior Member

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    cant you just crit my structure i dont care about coloring right now id rather concentrate on letters
     
  6. sInE946

    sInE946 New Member

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  7. -testify-

    -testify- Senior Member

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  8. searoner

    searoner Member

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    sine think you need to step back, find a nice simple font like ariel or even the letters on your kayboard and copy those, get then nailed and then you can start changing shit creating a style etc.
    tstify looks alright could do with work, sketch everyday whenever you get the chance and use all your ideas wether they work or not try everything.
    amber by sear:
    [Broken External Image]:http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/4647/amberjs5.jpg
     
  9. ASB_ONE

    ASB_ONE Senior Member

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    testify u need alot of practice

    sear nice generic style i like it not too sure bout the end caps on ur letters tho.
     
  10. ShIfTeD

    ShIfTeD Elite Member

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    you should have made all the lines thick, not just the tops
     
  11. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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    Sear, fuck everyone else's opinions, I think your simples look great as they are. Your handies seem a little shaky (the one at the bottom expecially) and the ER is seperated because the E isnt overlapped. Your M looks wierd because its spaced out too much... I love your A's and R's though.
     
  12. ASB_ONE

    ASB_ONE Senior Member

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    wats the point in critin if ur guna say that?
    dont get u man 1 min ur cool on here the next well bitter
    chill winstarn its all love
     
  13. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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    I didn't say that to be mean haha. I just meant I strongly disagree

    :edit: Also, I was talking about the people saying his simples looked blocky and stuff a couple pages back, not just people critting haha
     
  14. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    sear-i like your stuff, good simples. that m looks kinda weird but i really like your e's and a's ;)

    on a unrealted note...
    my peeta sketch made it in teh big boy poll :)
     
  15. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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    I saw that this morning, congrats comrade
     
  16. fitzy5814

    fitzy5814 Senior Member

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  17. enigmatic

    enigmatic Senior Member

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  19. G - Wahl

    G - Wahl Elite Member

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  20. c0ld

    c0ld Senior Member

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    OY.

    ok, first off, dont take any of this personally. its to help you.

    pointer #1- LOSE THE ARROW. NO.

    simplify your structure esp. on that S. all that stickin out does NOT look good.

    try to keep all your letters the same width and height, it will look a lot better.

    your 3-d isnt really bad. its relatively accurate, except for that arrow but get rid of that n itll be ok i guess.

    try to make your lines kinda straighter. if it helps, sketch it with pencil first, which i think you mayve done.....use a ruler if u have to.

    that should start you off.......post up your next one n well go from there.