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some critz would be appreciated!

Sear, that is burnin man! I wouldnt keep it the same size tho! looks better the way u did it

 

Did you bite that character from that Looney Toons basketball movie haha. It looks good though, that K is perfect, add the hole in the R and make the U fit more, it looks too "open." Like it's too spread apart and it doesn't look right with the other more compact letters

 

is it tht gross noone told me anythin about it? [/b][/quote]
nice tearing eye and face ... tear tear sob sob go die u dumass emo h34r:

 

Damn, that thing's been bumped over and over again for the past like 10 pages haha... Let it die already, people gave you critz and comments...

 

err dick shit this is the black book toy forum and done send us the websites

 

should i close offf the gaps?

 

kor: looks fine i jus dont like the "r" to much


crits....

 

this has gone wrong in so many ways!!!
u need help now!
do try fills yet.
START DOING BLOCKED LETTERS. LEARN THE STUCTURE OF UR LETTERS...

 

should i close offf the gaps?[/b][/quote]
yes, imo


and i have to say, the second K (the second 'piece') of kicklip9634 looks really good

 

Trash it and go to simples. Bubble and block letters are for you for a while.

 

im gonna have to go bleach my eyes now

 

everyone wait for the piece i've done it will kill...

 

Kickflip. Take a couple steps back. Go back to boring block letters. You'll hear it a thousand times but theres a reason for it. Dont do any extentions. Theres a reason why the thread is called: toy black books post your sketches with to many arrows. Once you start gaining letter structure then add shit on but you gotta start on the bottom.

 

should i close offf the gaps? [/b][/quote]
i dont think so it looks pretty cool n original like that IMO

 

Gesus called, he wants his style back.... [/b][/quote]
dude if u read a few pages back i say exactly what i did so why dont you n youre bitch muthafukin ,coksukin, ball likin homo ass outa here n get ure facts right before tryin to cus sumone fukin 9 year old

 

your still biting
and there is no excuse for biting
and i dont even understand why you'd bite gesus

did you know that sere means "to shit" in serbian
i bet ya didnt

 

chill out nero, jus cos u said 'i kno its a bite of gesus' dont make it ok!! wtf? biting is a big no no and jus cos u call your own bite before u post your flick dont make it ok.

his facts are straight, thats a massive gesus bite.
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