i like it man but im a fan of cartoony style . . imagine some heads aint feelin it cuz its too busy with random words and objects thrown on the page with no connection (look at the top one, all teh words and objects are on different planes making it look messy) . . people will tell you just do pencil sketches of letters and thats good advice if you want to follow the same path 95% of writers go down (shit i went down that path now my stuff looks just like everyone elses, i mean its cool to have alil somethin on lock but if you want to do something fresh and not copycat graf then you gotta start fresh) so i guess if 95% of the people on here tell you do blocks and simples that just means youre a 5 percenter . . my advice from a 95 percenters point of view is to work on your letters but keep teh karaks and themes and cartoon going . . find one or 2 fills that look good, easy to do and realtively simple (not busy to balance all the other things you like to add to your page) yuo know after writing all this ish i just remebered you posted somethin about how you never paint cuz you dont want to ruin your career . . . man your in high school, you should be tag banging everythin in sight . . . turn 18, stop tagging or atleast not as hot and start piecin and finding chill tunnels and what not . .