i like the throwie. umm make the fill more simple not so abstract sort of defeats the purpose of it being a simple, make it straight, and leave out those random circles. other than that i like.
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kore -- letters are coming along, and yeah, work on your 3D kaze -- rework your letters man elba -- diggin it. like soze said though, the fill is weird fitzy -- lose the arrows, make the lettering more consistent (make the bars same size) make your lines smooth and straight, your 3D needs help. you know about vanishing point and stuff?
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kore-dont do those add-ons, it makes it look like ass. other then that, make the s straight, ;ike the middle part, make it horizontal. fitzy-eww, simple simple simple. theres a crew around here called ake, young people but still damn good. ill find flickty flicks in a minute hurr. talkin ghetto is the best. i really really want to get good at wildstyle, i think this ones a little better then a few weeks ago, the extensions are a little more compacted within the letters, but im still not happy with it.. YA MEAN?!
lol pinky i love the backround, reminds me of cheese. but other than that the green was a weird color to throw in but its still good i like the colors.
Nice sketch enuf and soze This is my third sketch I made, Can you guys please rate it? Any comments? 1. 2. 3. This one is kinda funny, I found myself orange, red and yellow crayola crayons.
cove. chill out with all da jagged edges make block letters nice and simple, maybe some 3d with a ruler and please don't use crayons.
Lol, ok thanks crayons were the only thing I had, you won't be seeing me doing anything else with crayons
i made this as a joke and decided to post it. dont tell me what to improve on cause i didnt take my time and this aint how i really write frogy
soze, im not trying to start shit, but that looks a little too much like CEZR, and the name is the same just different spelling. influence is always cool, but just try to add a little more of yourself into it.