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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    i like the new. more development and its gunna be hot.
     
  2. Kayone707

    Kayone707 Moderator

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    id say go back to simples. theres too much stuff sticking out...

    Cezr. that last one would look crazy as a roller or on a freight
     
  3. novella

    novella Senior Member

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    this didnt make it in time for the poll, but whatevs

    what do you guys think?

    ai133.photobucket.com_albums_q50_Novella1_causr3.jpg

    also cezr, that bottom sketch is fire. i love it man
     
  4. inkbits

    inkbits Senior Member

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    Might look more balanced if the extension on your R flicked back down in the same fashion as your C does Novella. Your A and U look really well balaced together and overall it flows out quite nicely.

    Dig where that E is coming from Cezr, would be a nice panel.



    This one's work in progress for now, been lazy and am sticking to quick shit until the weekend. There'll be a circle inserted above the P which is why it looks kinda unbalaced atm.

    [Broken External Image]:http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p9377403.jpg
     
  5. Kayone707

    Kayone707 Moderator

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    i actually think this looks better then most of the stuff in the polls... i woulda voted for it
     
  6. Truth.

    Truth. Senior Member

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    yah cezr that noo stuff looks good. i rly like it
     
  7. nomad

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    Only just started sketching been doin stencils and stickers n tags for a while any tips?
     
  8. Truth.

    Truth. Senior Member

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    start of by doin letters on ur keyboard, none of those squiggly lins and w/e, gotta keep ur perspective! just do simple block letters, and get ur name down in teh simpleness
     
  9. nomad

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    yeah i've done some simples block busters and what not but i want THAT one progressing

    also straight lines are hard for me because i have really bad shakey hands so yeah
    (i mean acctually spraying it not that i was drawing staight but it came out like that ^^)
    but yeah
     
  10. alive

    alive Banned

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    stop coloring. u dont need the color. u need to focus on the letter structure. start doing blockbusters. i dont give a shit if uv done them before. you need to do more. practice your straight lines, b/c that wobbly shit will not fly. if ur rele that desperate, for now use a ruler or a straight edge, while u work on your pen control on the side.
     
  11. nomad

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  12. wookiE

    wookiE Senior Member

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    yeah wobbly borders arent nice
     
  13. nomad

    nomad Member

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    yeah i had doubts about the wobbly shit
     
  14. Apoc

    Apoc Elite Member

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    the whole shit is wack, i'm not even gunna bump it for the sake of this page.

    but on the real, if you wanna make it better, just... practice alot. And read the how-to threads.
     
  15. etch a sketch

    etch a sketch Senior Member

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    uhh - its godd but the a kinda looks a bit exaggerated

    asb - i like your style a lot keep it up

    albert fish - that kinda reminds me of bapers style unless you are baper..

    yarharhar - i love the throwie. i wish i could od that haha

    these crits are for a couple pages back i forgot that i was lookin for my post and i saw the flicks a couple pages back.. <_<
     
  16. *LoST*

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  17. L33mur

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    kin, at least you're starting on straight letters (the dumbass that I am refuses to..)... but try to get some style in there. You have the concept, but don't bother adding color and 3d to something that isn't awesome or else you're just wasting some time. But yeah, look at some handstyles, some classic graff.. some fonts.. and manipulate those letters.



    and to post something of my own.. just something i drew up while watching 'Piece by piece'

    [Broken External Image]:http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r99/l33m/IMG_0809.jpg
     
  18. Copieright

    Copieright Senior Member

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    Which one do you prefer?
    ANd i mean just the shape not highlights or something

    ai140.photobucket.com_albums_r21_Copieright_17_01_07_1649.jpg

    ai140.photobucket.com_albums_r21_Copieright_17_01_07_1648.jpg

    and ik would like some crits
     
  19. nomad

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    like the 1st one more
     
  20. ras

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    Leemur3...you shoulnt refuse to do simples...its the only way foward.. :)