Added that exclamation mark and erased some building block lines

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I dont really post much in this forum, but here is a recent sketch i've done
critizizim would be apreciatted

and yes i know the a is messed up.


yes im well aware its toy..
<_<

 

a lot better than some of the stuf in here

 

bouncing soul the exclamation point really evens it out and makes it way better but its sick either way.



blackbook cover

 

bump for crits.

 

the s in the second one sucks, make your 3d the same color as the outline on throwies, and simplify your letters on the 3rd. ALSO crit the people above you before bumbing or or posting your own. (thats the most important part of this post)

 

AcuTe1-StaSHBoy-

no crown.

heres a little tip, make faster movements with your markers and it will look much cleaner
practise makes perfect.

AND DONT BUMP YOUR OWN STUFF.

 

Fixed my arrow (or rather changed it to my liking), completely changed the exclamation mark for the better and yeah...

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for people/practice.

 

bouncingsoul - you should just ditch the arrow completely.. give it a simmple look.. simple's good..

 

bump for new page.

dont write aek, names taken all over.
and here in NJ by someone good. [/b][/quote]
bump cause i got nothing.

 

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now?

 

foesale- much better without the gay swirls

 

fosale you improved, your three dee is everywhere tho

 

""SCC"" you should do it over but this time you should get rid of the big handstyle and put a small one on the side, and on the bottom, that brown line looks like you were testing out a marker or something and so do the other ones on the right. if your going to do that, do it somewhere else, but if thats not the case, loose them to. other than that i like that style your using cuz i haven't seen much like it.

 

the brown shit on the side is not on the sticker part of the sticker
i was testing out a marker

 

but if your gonna put that up on the street dont you want it to look clean? thats why im saying, just do it on some other peice of paper so itll come out better. small things make a big difference sometimes man.

 

paper cost to much stickers are free

 

bump... still wondering