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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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  2. yogah frog

    yogah frog Member

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    Bounce i always loved your styles. thats fucking phat tho. i would shorten the top right part of the k a bit and i cant see anything i wouldnt do different/ :) big ups yo.
     
  3. ras

    ras Banned

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    Bounce...everytings good .... idunno bout the L tho..

    SCC....and...you should go S I M P L E ... what does it say ?
     
  4. Truth.

    Truth. Senior Member

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    ezil, bueatiful fill and colours, the letters just need work

    bounce, is that a new style? i really like it, nice work!

    crits please

    View attachment 248818
     
  5. shithead onerzzzz

    shithead onerzzzz Member

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    LIMIT. not bad bro but try and make your letters a little closer together i think. i dont really like the purple in the fill tho, it distracts from the outline.
    BOUNCING. really dope man loving it.
    TRUTH. Looking sick man the only thing i suggest is on the top of the H put the line on two different levels after the middle line curves down.

    [Broken External Image]:http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/Picture108.jpg

    not real happy but o wells crits please.
     
  6. Kayone707

    Kayone707 Moderator

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    looks nice.. i like the letters. everyone should take some notes on your structure..

    but theres some things id change on this lil sketch
    (as u can tell u didnt take my time. i also didnt make "Kelly" the same size eh...)
    [Broken External Image]:http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/9351/spa0454lu4.jpg

    1)The I.. make it longer and loose the arrow, also add a top part to it and fix up them hearts.
    2)the L. i made mine too small in the sketch. but since its a different word, make the L about the same size as the I.
    3)O, the Cross looks kinda outa place, i did somethin different but its all up to you.
    4)V, i really live your V. i wouldnt change a thing (i fucked up on mine)
    5)E, your E looks a lil big. and after the E, it looks too plain. add a lil exteneion to the bottom part of the E, kinda like i did it (if you want)
    6)the K looks really plain. Fluff it up (if its the first letter of your ladys name afterall) i made the top part match the V's top part. i also kicked out the K's leg a lil more
    7)E, your E in KELLY is kinda small, (but it matches your O so what ever)
    8)LL, i just made them a lil bigger and added the lil top part thats also on the K and the V
    9)Y, your Y looks good. i dont know why i kicked out the Y in the lil sketch i did.. do what ever you want
    10)the cut in the "!" looks too outa place. so does that dot.. add a heart (you do love her right? add more hearts haha)

    *You could also see i added some lines through the top parts in the V,K and L. just to add a lil more. i also added some lil Bits.

    but thats about it. keep it up
     
  7. shithead onerzzzz

    shithead onerzzzz Member

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    bouncing you have me inspired to do some curvy letters with a ballpoint! :p
     
  8. KrookONE

    KrookONE Senior Member

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    looks nice.. i like the letters. everyone should take some notes on your structure..

    but theres some things id change on this lil sketch
    (as u can tell u didnt take my time. i also didnt make "Kelly" the same size eh...)
    [Broken External Image]:http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/9351/spa0454lu4.jpg

    1)The I.. make it longer and loose the arrow, also add a top part to it and fix up them hearts.
    2)the L. i made mine too small in the sketch. but since its a different word, make the L about the same size as the I.
    3)O, the Cross looks kinda outa place, i did somethin different but its all up to you.
    4)V, i really live your V. i wouldnt change a thing (i fucked up on mine)
    5)E, your E looks a lil big. and after the E, it looks too plain. add a lil exteneion to the bottom part of the E, kinda like i did it (if you want)
    6)the K looks really plain. Fluff it up (if its the first letter of your ladys name afterall) i made the top part match the V's top part. i also kicked out the K's leg a lil more
    7)E, your E in KELLY is kinda small, (but it matches your O so what ever)
    8)LL, i just made them a lil bigger and added the lil top part thats also on the K and the V
    9)Y, your Y looks good. i dont know why i kicked out the Y in the lil sketch i did.. do what ever you want
    10)the cut in the "!" looks too outa place. so does that dot.. add a heart (you do love her right? add more hearts haha)

    *You could also see i added some lines through the top parts in the V,K and L. just to add a lil more. i also added some lil Bits.

    but thats about it. keep it up [/b][/quote]
    i was also going to say somethin about the top heart ..but its already been done..nice job overall
     
  9. Loz emlintio

    Loz emlintio Senior Member

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    I am finaly able to post images on here, cus my comp at home don't work when i try to host images. So here goes,

    I did this piecce for my mate "Mike" just as a fuck up. but he told me to complete it, so I did....

    [Broken External Image]:http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/7338/untitledju7.png

    Crits please.

    THanks
     
  10. Loz emlintio

    Loz emlintio Senior Member

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    THis is another one that i kinda fucked up when i tried a chatacter afterwards.
    The "C" fucked up i know, and the lined 3D ain't all that great.

    [Broken External Image]:http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/5889/sicsf6.png

    Crits? if any, thanks :)
     
  11. Loz emlintio

    Loz emlintio Senior Member

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  12. Skeam

    Skeam Senior Member

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    instead of making the lines all jaggered make them dead straight, if it still looks shit after that then just got back to dead simples man.
     
  13. -sap-24

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    keep it simple,
    make your letters more flowing ect.

    your 3-d looks well done but it looks like you spent wayy more time on the 3-d than the rest of it.

    so just keep it simple, and refrain from the jaggad (sp?) knife look, as "cool" as it may be.

    :)
    Akts2
     
  14. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    god damn.
    took you long enough. :lol:

    i tried that whole bic shading thing,
    i have a feeling i failed horribly..
    View attachment 248839
    says melo.
     
  15. Loz emlintio

    Loz emlintio Senior Member

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    yo, thanks - SaP - & Skeam, i'll try using straight and solid lines :)

    every crit helps.
    ;)
     
  16. ras

    ras Banned

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    UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUH..

    What actually do you write.. ? :)
     
  17. sketch3

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    sorry man but every from the structer to the karek are weak,and dont get me started on the handstyle
     
  18. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    i write melo
    i was just having some trouble with the elo for awile.
    so i was sketching different stufff.
     
  19. ras

    ras Banned

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    aaahh..

    Carmelo Anthony..

    Hahahaaa..erm

    Loving your style...very twisty..

    flows like a hurricane...haha...what a coinsedence (sp)

    im jus wondering bout the M...nice concept of it tho...i just dont like it..
     
  20. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    haha.

    thanks,
    and not.
    :lol: