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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    i write TORN but sometimes i write TRN
     
  2. G - Wahl

    G - Wahl Elite Member

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    alright haha..what you think of my ish
     
  3. ''SCC''

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  4. G - Wahl

    G - Wahl Elite Member

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    Get rid of all that excess shit around the letters..Just stick to the letters and dont make them so jaged and and sharp looking
     
  5. EasyMac

    EasyMac Senior Member

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    Look Scc.....it may look to YOU that the picture looks good and that's normal to be honest, but you will, if you continue to sketch like a madman, get better and you WILL realise completly what they're talking about, trust me , don't try to be pro right away it's impossible, get rid of anything that looks remotely like an extension, and just focus on learning how to bend and manipulate the letters properly before you take the next step, I thought I was producing some crazy shit a while back and I look at it now and I finally realise that it was hideous .....not art, you don't HAVE to start doing lame bubble letters but just take it down a notch.

    Peace
     
  6. ''HAZE'' *88*

    ''HAZE'' *88* Senior Member

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    i don't think it looks good with the shit sticking out..basicly what G Wahl said.. but what do you ppls think of this here piece i done up...?
    ai126.photobucket.com_albums_p94_letsgobombin_DVC02109.jpg
     
  7. ..SmOeK 1..

    ..SmOeK 1.. Senior Member

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  8. ''HAZE'' *88*

    ''HAZE'' *88* Senior Member

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    thats a tag put in in toy tags
    BUMP...
    ai126.photobucket.com_albums_p94_letsgobombin_DVC02109.jpg
     
  9. noam12

    noam12 Senior Member

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    wasnt there a aweosme writer named faze2?
     
  10. G - Wahl

    G - Wahl Elite Member

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    G- Wahl - Try loosin the bubble letters and try some brick letters. Dont really know how much else to comment on ur work. [/QUOTE]
    Its called a bomb
     
  11. ''HAZE'' *88*

    ''HAZE'' *88* Senior Member

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    i have no idea.. but ima pretty sure it was PHASE-TWO not, FAZE TWO
    and if i was to paint that i wouldn't add the ONE part anyway that was just there to cover space.. crits?
     
  12. noam12

    noam12 Senior Member

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  13. ICER

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  14. chili

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    hj
     
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  15. Rust.905

    Rust.905 Senior Member

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  16. ICER

    ICER Senior Member

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    thanks rust!

    chilli- loose some of the arrows you got to many and loose the thing connecting the O and the R
     
  17. sky 5

    sky 5 Elite Member

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    gwahl - that DEO is nice and simple, good paint style

    haze - i would probaly not do those lil jaggy things coming off some of the Z and N . . . looks like letter/bar proportion is off, not bad thoo, maybe try gettin your letters alil closer together (slightly overlapping each other)

    icer - thats alright, not feelin the E . . .looks like teh right side bar of the 2nd S is alil thicker and goes at a slightly different angel then the right side bar of the 1st S . .

    sore -i like the E, dont like the S
     
  18. shamee1991

    shamee1991 Elite Member

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    go simple BLOCKED letters dont add random shit to it. start simple and smooth no jagged edges on the side of ur letters. and make ur letters the same lenght apart.
     
  19. ''HAZE'' *88*

    ''HAZE'' *88* Senior Member

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    alright.. yea its suppose to look like the F being slightly smaller then kinda getting bigget going to the E
     
  20. ''HAZE'' *88*

    ''HAZE'' *88* Senior Member

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    fuck blockletters.. i can do shit in block letters easy.. and its boring and plain as hell..