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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. [N01R]

    [N01R] Member

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    chili maby you could try and attach the E aqnd the S

    and seek thats a nice peice man its really clean
     
  2. nickstix

    nickstix Senior Member

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    seek...that is very clean and the simples are great, but the k seems a little far away from the last e imo

    chili...those simples are hurtin, heres a couple tips; when you sketch do it with blocks(like on your keyboard) also dont get ahead of yourself and try to add things too quick. o and dont listen to no1r, connecting the e and s would not look good at all.
     
  3. ternoner

    ternoner Senior Member

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    pretty sure this is the one that im gonna paint from now on...
    ai32.photobucket.com_albums_d7_onionmeaster_throwup.jpg
     
  4. shifty!

    shifty! Senior Member

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  5. Gist

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  6. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    FUCKING AWESOME
    liking it alot
    the n's sorta big though.... :unsure:
    haha
    rep its good but fix the r so it isnt so big and wide
     
  7. _SHIFT

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  8. nickstix

    nickstix Senior Member

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    tern...that throwie is sick, get out and paint it

    shift...SIMPLES, that looks bad. start out by doing block letters LIKE THIS and dont add extensions,bits,w.e. untill you have simples down.
     
  9. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    shift. dont bother finishing it. start over but this time loose the arrows and keep your letters the same size. your letters seem to get skinnier as they go. its a bad habbit. but its easy to get rid of with some patience.
     
  10. ternoner

    ternoner Senior Member

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    shift..., its un balanced the best its got id say is the coloring its nice but looks shitty due to no letter structure and i wont finish
     
  11. Nosypainter

    Nosypainter Elite Member

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    hey fuck you buddy your the biggest toy of us all... ;) ;) ;) ;) :p
     
  12. EVAKuation

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    Shift- it does look really unbalanced, try going simpler.

    If someone could critique I would appreciate it...

    [Broken External Image]:http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j50/ghr7891/Sketch.jpg

    The color scheme and coloring job sucks, but it was super late last night, but whatever.
     
  13. Borat:

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  15. Xsjadox

    Xsjadox Senior Member

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    With colours and minor little touch ups that can actually look sick.

    afarm1.static.flickr.com_158_386971723_d268b28fe0_m.png
     
  16. iwritebasic

    iwritebasic Senior Member

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    fuck that shit is sick, and the pick above me is fucking cleeeannn

    heres mine, changed my name to baser:
    ai17.tinypic.com_2i9s6qb.gif
     
  17. whahappen?

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  18. Code

    Code Senior Member

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    Bump!

    Xsjadox- I like it for some reason, really clean, just not feelin that F its to loose, its all over the place, and the extensions on it really dont flow.

    Borat- That piece smoke piece is ok just keep workin on those letters, specifcly on the S and the O

    And your other piece i am not feelin it, letters in my oppinion are horribal.

    Evak- Work on your letter letter structure, and 3d.

    Shift- i actully find that piece very attractive :), just think you should make the letters like your "S", dont like how most of your piece is so choppy.

    Esko- Its clean just work on the letters, specificly the E, it doesent go with the piece

    Whathappend- I like it, just maybe work on the V

    Basic- Go to block letters, and work on 3d
     
  19. ekso

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  20. shifty!

    shifty! Senior Member

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    1nonly baze, where do you see arrows in my throw??

    but thanks