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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. meph

    meph Member

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    Blak-T looks pretty nice like, but it'd be better if you'd spent a bit more time on it so there was more to crit

    Zep0 - that's wack, do simples man, lose all them silly arrows and work on keeping the letters the same size width etc,

    Spectr - getting there but you still haven't realised every bar in the letters have to be the same size, like the middle horizontal bar of the S has to be the same thickness as the top vertical bar of the S. In terms of choosing a name, choose one that means something to you, flows well, whatever.

    Here's my latest anyway, sorry for scrumpled paper and poor lighting:

    [Broken External Image]:http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/2357/16022007370iw8.jpg
     
  2. Quadratic

    Quadratic Senior Member

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    ^
    decent simples, but your 3D is wack.

    im about to do your exchange Seph. Already finished Cyko and Spectr's.

    i got Zeal, Pesa, and Seph still on the list.

    Anyone else want one? PM me.
     
  3. MASTE2

    MASTE2 Member

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    Use your head when coming up with names. Try flirting with letters and mixing them up some. When I renamed myself I tried to stray away from actual words, really because SPECTR is probably already being done (or has been done previously).

    As an example, I've seen different throws around by this person COS, COSE, COES, CESO. All the same style but keep working with your shit till you like it and it pops out.
     
  4. meph

    meph Member

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    Aye 3d is fooked, alright sound - i'll start yours too now.

    Hey newby, I made a little tut for you just to show you the bar theory thing i've been banging on about, as it's easier to see visually:

    [Broken External Image]:http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/438/16022007371jg2.jpg

    If you look at the left hand S. all the bars are different widths and shit - this is how you do it and why it's wrong. If you look at the right hand S all the bars are (roughly - it was a fast sketch =P) equal widths and that's the correct way to do it.

    When you next do a peice, construct ever letter using equally sized bars and trust me, it'll be way better =)
     
  5. Snapple

    Snapple Member

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  6. F.R.A.T.

    F.R.A.T. Senior Member

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    Snapple man i hate ot say it but goo simple

    ai84.photobucket.com_albums_k18_thebucketofphotos_DifferentMekThrows.jpg

    some throws, im liking the one iwth the dots on either side of it
     
  7. meph

    meph Member

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    Those are tight frat, nice work. Mebbe try stickin a face with a goofy grin on the e? Could like cool
     
  8. F.R.A.T.

    F.R.A.T. Senior Member

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    yeye i might put some hillbilly teeth on one of em
     
  9. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    haha yea and put him with a reed sticking outta his mouth
     
  10. fredom-writer

    fredom-writer Senior Member

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    GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  11. Quadratic

    Quadratic Senior Member

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    everyone in the past couple pages telling people to go simple...

    most of you need to heed your own advice.

    Seph has the right idea.

    Spectr is on the right track but not quite there yet.

    if i left anyone out, my bad :)
     
  12. Albert Fish

    Albert Fish Elite Member

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    i don't feel like critting everyone. i saw some sumoe a couple pages back that was burning

    RETURN OF THE DONG PIECE.
    ai42.photobucket.com_albums_e336_notvdoctor_homoe.jpg
     
  13. darthbaker

    darthbaker Senior Member

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    -sume

    on that last sketch for wildstyle

    dude your letters ( i know this probably sounds retarded) look like agressive if you know what im sayin like they look mean..ill shyte
     
  14. Quadratic

    Quadratic Senior Member

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    ^^ word. Sumoe, you have improved like tenfold since the last time i was on this forum. Major props.


    heres 3 out of 5. I still owe one for Pesa and Zeal. Anyone else want a sketch PM me with your name.

    I will also PM these to u in case u arent online right now.

    spectr
    View attachment 251409

    seph
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    cyko
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  15. darthbaker

    darthbaker Senior Member

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    quad- mad hot shit..cant wait to see what you got for me
     
  16. sema

    sema Senior Member

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    sry gotta bump once
     
  17. yung-wun

    yung-wun Member

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    im really liking my cyko u did
     
  18. Quadratic

    Quadratic Senior Member

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    thanks. its not that good, but you see what im sayin...

    although your name is kinda cliche, the curves of the C and O make for good flow.
    if you can understand that and work with it, u can come up with some good shit.
    simples combined with flow makes for good pieces always. (in my opinion)
    you dont always need connectors, bits, arrows, etc to make something look good. a really sick simple that flows really well beats a mediocre anything else any day (my opinion.)
     
  19. AerosalAssasin

    AerosalAssasin Senior Member

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    if you could bomb that asesr thatd look pretty dope
     
  20. darthbaker

    darthbaker Senior Member

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