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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. ..SmOeK 1..

    ..SmOeK 1.. Senior Member

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    Thanks code. see thats useful advice.


    Wheres is my 3D off? (just so i know where to fix)



    Lol.come....wow...like u didnt even try to change a damn thing man...Obviously people on these forums will know.
     
  2. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    lol that duck is dope [/b][/quote]
    Bump...got overlooked by stupid simple talk..

    React..leave it out mate..okay he bit mr.wiggles..but everyone bites..not saying its a good thing..but it happens

    but i gotta admit..whut a dumb fuck bite..hahaha :lol: :lol:

    Fap..do a buddy a favour..lose the F..and write ApTwo..please..your F's are shit..no offence..theyre the letter that seems to always ruin your peices.. :(
     
  3. Mse

    Mse Elite Member

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    its not his, code

    and code, keep your letters the same thickness, notice the e

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    ai19.tinypic.com_2r2ci9y.gif
     
  4. ..SmOeK 1..

    ..SmOeK 1.. Senior Member

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    over looked? You got more crits than anyone else that posted :D


    Mse- Love the first one, love the jester crown type thing. Have never seen anything of urs with a fill, do you do them?:S
     
  5. Code

    Code Senior Member

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    Smoek- k this is what i am talking about, your vanishing point is everywhere you need just one lol

    [Broken External Image]:http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/2998/modifiedcd8.png

    Mse- dud its really nice, cant think anything is wrong

    Aimo- Like everything accept the A, the right side of it is to thin for my liking.

    And just a real fast question are you guys tellin gme i am biting mr.Wiggles, lol because i havent ever seen that site
     
  6. Lunatic

    Lunatic Senior Member

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    fuck thats dope i love the red one
     
  7. shamee1991

    shamee1991 Elite Member

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    mse looks kool. needs to have boarder for each letter i think. stand out more.
     
  8. NewbyTJ

    NewbyTJ Senior Member

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    Yo Ras i been looking at alot of Seen's oldshool shit especially alot on the trains and i think i understand what u mean by this.......
    Spec..i dont think you needed to do keyboard letters..just do the simples..lean em to one side..push em up..and thats it really..but dont bend the letters..look at sum of SEENS old skool simples on trains..i think thats whut u shud do..
    ....But do u think u could do a quik sketch of some random letters or somthing just so i understand Thanx man and those 3 new Aimo peices are chillen and i dissagree I deffinitly think you got some skills when it comes to drawing characters Stay up and Thanx
     
  9. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    okay I'll crit you...edges are too jagged and it does nothing to make your piece look better it just makes it look alot worse. And you have these random bumps that also fuck up the look of the sketch. Does it say "RL" if so, the structure of the "R" looks awkward, but the structure of the "L" isn't too horrible, so keep doing simples I guess...

    MSE-likin' the bottom one more but they're both pretty nice, your style is so pointy...haha looks good though.
     
  10. Xsjadox

    Xsjadox Senior Member

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    Heh,yeah.. goddamn F's... Come`on someone do some f's for me to bite,I haven't seen too many so it's hard to get ideas :/
     
  11. ..SmOeK 1..

    ..SmOeK 1.. Senior Member

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    Its AL which is for Alka.

    But okay thank you for the good crit. See by ur last reply to me with the whole "newbie" thing. You cant totally 100% deny what i said wasnt true. A bunch of people just say do simple keyboard letters and dont know anything about what they are saying and just saying it because they see alot of the better artist saying it. Its the easy way to get out of posting pictures and getting crits without giving crits back. Since no one gives crits to whoever doesnt crit people just say . Do simples, thinking its a crit so people will crit there own work.


    Anyways thanks again Sume for the good crit, it actually helped. Now i dont know why you couldnt have just posted that in the first place because you and I both know your not a "newbie" and you didnt fall under that catagory.
     
  12. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    NEWBY..you get the jist right..they dont exactly slant..but w.e...just look at more and more of Seens eldest train bombs...or look at..Norm..Revs...Cost...they do good blocks..or try Dondi

    r.i.p

    Fap..i did an F in my style..you can fine tune it to how you like it..and the bottom extension you can switch to the other side..you can see wut it looks like as i left a hollow line of whut it wud looklike..

    hope i helped :( :D
     
  13. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    I'm Sume, he wasn't saying your letters look like mine cause they look nothing like mine, but your name is really close to mine...
     
  14. Mse

    Mse Elite Member

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    sleet
    im gonna have to do a someone piece
    sorry
     
  15. Xsjadox

    Xsjadox Senior Member

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    Thanks man Aimo.. Time to go work on mah / your F :p
     
  16. slEEt

    slEEt Elite Member

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    Have at it.
     
  17. F.R.A.T.

    F.R.A.T. Senior Member

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    some stickers dont know if this is the right place
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  18. .D.H.

    .D.H. Senior Member

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    the 'm' in ur throw needs work...i dont really like it.
    but the other shit looks pretty good. keep workin it.
     
  19. ToekDeluxe

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  20. pez ss

    pez ss Senior Member

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    G Wahl - make the "l" a little bit more slanted like the rest of the letters, also like above me.. make the "o" hole a little smaller. also add a drop shadow and it will look better

    Stem-one the only letter i like at all is the e, i guess the m is ok but its all off center so it throws it off.

    Bump because of only like 1 reply and 40 other pictures posted <_< [/b][/quote]
    likein the colour