lol fosale Maybe I should just keep tagging fap and piecing something different :/

 

here is something i did 4 a toy battle sorry about it being on the side i couldnt spin it

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crits?

 

dont do so many folow through lines it doesnt look good

 

neza kinda looks alot like gesus 's' at the top but crits i can give are change the bottom part of the 's'



alot.

.ps can any one tell me how to get past my schools rm saftey net??????

 

its the m tht is the fuk up n da s is pritty shitt but da e n k are alright. n yeah i do n to do stop doinj da folo thru lines all over the place, which ones look realy nad?

 

azer- I kinda like the W, but thats about it. Too many of those brick thingys stickin out. Acouple can look good but u over did it i think.


Alright i took some peoples advice and tooks some of the jaggedness out of the letters. This is what i got out of it.

From This:
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To This:
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Just an outline, too early to do coloring. Will end up ruining it permanently

(Please ignore the K, lol i didnt know how to put it and was stuck and just wanted to finish)

 

:huh: yes i was bored

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ow by da way its an m u lookin at it the rong way

 

MSPAINT fo life, yo.
I need some crits on this , thanks.

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feelin the "R"

EDIT:: TOEK No. Get rid of the karak and put it on the side... thats the samething Ras Amino amigo w/e you are now.. did... not feeling the karak as a letter

 

Well why don't you tag FAP and piece FAPTWO or FATFAP lol...... that should be enough letters to do your thing with...

 

BORED piece is sweet apart from the E

 

Tryin tooo hard !!!

are you saying that you dont like what i used to do with the faces and its bad ?? .. ( not that it is bad to do..but u must have the letters down to flow..thanks to Trick's , who explained !! )

or are you saying it in the tone that i personally did it and that it was a good thing in a way .. of my older style .. ( even tho i didnt start it..i by definatly didnt start it..i wanna make that clear for the dumb ass's who will say..yo..ras..never started it..fucking..seen did..even tho he didnt..it was Lase and T-Kid and Sak who started it.. ) .. but non the less i did it on here..

Toek..yeah..trying is right..lose the face for the O..its just ruins the flow

( now i know what yall was onabout when i was doing it...bbahaha..when i get my letters down..ill be doing it all the time..bahahaha.. )

Fap..dont write Fap..wirte..TAP TWO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! for meeee :wub:

Aloso PM me if you wanna be in with the ELASTICO'S and to raise awerness on the ELASTICO'S by putting then in you sig..ill send you the right info..just PM me..THEYRE WATCHING YOU...FUCK PUG !!

 

yes i fooked up on the E i hate doing E's

 

im sayin that I liked your older style better... like how you did you pieces and THEN you had karaks on the side... I didnt like then IN the pieces

 

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just keep working on them letters veks
but dont ever draw anything like that last pic an post it on a graff forum

 

2nd one is ok toss the 1st n 3rd

 

anyone wana do a friendly battle? im bored