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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
how about this...
bop get your letters all together
wow i forgot about anything else from the last ten pages with this shit.
tern- not sure what u were thinking when u shaded the 2nd one
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Just a quick throw I drew, I write grape but this image is three of my short throws (G.P) together. Crits welcome...
Bop: I think you could do something neat with the bottom left. Seems the most original and interesting to work with.
Tern: That doesn't even belong in the toys forum lol! I'm lovin' it! The one with the cracks adds a nice touch. You've definately got somethin'.
Cola: Nice, basic lettering, I like it. I agree with Iluvhoodrats though, fatten the "N" and mess with the "C" a bit. Looks good though!
Mezn, sry I didn't crit, we posted at the EXACT same time lol. I like it. Just try to keep the letters a bit more consistent in terms of size. Maybe fatten the "N" a bit 2. It's comin along good.
haven't posted any flicks in a while..
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one last bump
lunatic: kind of like the first K and the A if it get's tweaked a bit. that could have some nice potential if you clean it up a bit to flow a little better, like making the two K's match
extremely poorly lit, looks nicer in real light but would be ruined by flash. and i wasnt serious with all those arrows, i wanted to try an oldschool wildstyle approach by just throwing arrows and connecting shit.
ive been bombin for a couple months but i havent started doin any big peices or anything.. i sketched these out lemme know what u think
Grape1 - Nice style i like it... the only thing i have to say is u should make the top of the P fatter and the Bottom of it skinnier... the one in the middle looks more like a P then the other 2.. post ur full throw i wanna see it
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im aware of the obvious flaw in that last one... my marker exploded on me
ask-like it looks good
glas-imo paint worthy i love the style
heres a lil womp a domp
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blackbooking from vacation. i would have blended better but i had to use sharpies not prismas.
crit others before you post your own stuff
mith heres yours
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ask nice simples but on the bottom dont put the lil bits coming off the k's leg
krak dont make the a so chunky on the right side
glas thatll be a nice style soon i like it though
zeal do simples
Thanks for the crits ask. My full throw isn't very good, I've only done a few but crits are wanted for it. Having a bit of issues with it.
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Btw crits for ask, I really dig the first 1, but if you needed to do one really fast i'd probably pick the second one. But if i were to give any advice maybe just make the leg of the "K" longer.
wow i forgot about anything else from the last ten pages with this shit. [/b][/quote]
GLAS needs 3d or shadow, maybe overlap the letters for a throwie, looks decent for what it is though. ASK looks nice but i would take a little more time on it, and if your using a pentel white or paint marker for the white shine i wouldnt, ive tried everything and the only thing that works are white out pens such as these http://www.keysan.com/pictures/big/xpen9556.jpg and once you get used to the squeezing and presure on the ball point tip it can write perfect. BOP, all i have to say is you should figure out what the hell your going to do before you pick up the markers.
Theres a "N" in COLA now???? haha thanks for the crits though, ima work on it a bit
bump, improvements i could make?
and for the "do simples" crit, is that the only crit people know how to give?
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