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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. F.R.A.T.

    F.R.A.T. Senior Member

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  2. ternoner

    ternoner Senior Member

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    bop get your letters all together
     
  3. NICCSACC

    NICCSACC Banned

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    bump [/b][/quote]
    wow i forgot about anything else from the last ten pages with this shit.
     
  4. theprokilla

    theprokilla Senior Member

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    tern- not sure what u were thinking when u shaded the 2nd one


    ai65.photobucket.com_albums_h240_theprokilla_SANY0038.jpg
    crits?
     
  5. Grape1

    Grape1 Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5549/gunner56051ib1.jpg

    Just a quick throw I drew, I write grape but this image is three of my short throws (G.P) together. Crits welcome...

    Crits:

    Bop: I think you could do something neat with the bottom left. Seems the most original and interesting to work with.

    Tern: That doesn't even belong in the toys forum lol! I'm lovin' it! The one with the cracks adds a nice touch. You've definately got somethin'.

    Cola: Nice, basic lettering, I like it. I agree with Iluvhoodrats though, fatten the "N" and mess with the "C" a bit. Looks good though!

    Thanks...
     
  6. Grape1

    Grape1 Senior Member

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    Mezn, sry I didn't crit, we posted at the EXACT same time lol. I like it. Just try to keep the letters a bit more consistent in terms of size. Maybe fatten the "N" a bit 2. It's comin along good.
     
  7. Lunatic

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  8. glass

    glass Senior Member

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    one last bump

    lunatic: kind of like the first K and the A if it get's tweaked a bit. that could have some nice potential if you clean it up a bit to flow a little better, like making the two K's match
     
  9. zale

    zale Senior Member

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    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v475_EZALE_P1010213_1.jpg

    extremely poorly lit, looks nicer in real light but would be ruined by flash. and i wasnt serious with all those arrows, i wanted to try an oldschool wildstyle approach by just throwing arrows and connecting shit.

    says RAGE
     
  10. escobar

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    ive been bombin for a couple months but i havent started doin any big peices or anything.. i sketched these out lemme know what u think

    Grape1 - Nice style i like it... the only thing i have to say is u should make the top of the P fatter and the Bottom of it skinnier... the one in the middle looks more like a P then the other 2.. post ur full throw i wanna see it

    [Broken External Image]:http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3842/graf178qk5.jpg
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    im aware of the obvious flaw in that last one... my marker exploded on me
     
  11. bopONE

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  12. zale

    zale Senior Member

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    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v475_EZALE_P1010214.jpg

    blackbooking from vacation. i would have blended better but i had to use sharpies not prismas.
     
  13. glass

    glass Senior Member

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    crit others before you post your own stuff
     
  14. whahappen?

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  15. Grape1

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    Thanks for the crits ask. My full throw isn't very good, I've only done a few but crits are wanted for it. Having a bit of issues with it.

    [Broken External Image]:http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/8113/hjhj001yo4.jpg

    Btw crits for ask, I really dig the first 1, but if you needed to do one really fast i'd probably pick the second one. But if i were to give any advice maybe just make the leg of the "K" longer.

    Thanks...
     
  16. NICCSACC

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    wow i forgot about anything else from the last ten pages with this shit. [/b][/quote]
    bump
     
  17. zale

    zale Senior Member

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    GLAS needs 3d or shadow, maybe overlap the letters for a throwie, looks decent for what it is though. ASK looks nice but i would take a little more time on it, and if your using a pentel white or paint marker for the white shine i wouldnt, ive tried everything and the only thing that works are white out pens such as these http://www.keysan.com/pictures/big/xpen9556.jpg and once you get used to the squeezing and presure on the ball point tip it can write perfect. BOP, all i have to say is you should figure out what the hell your going to do before you pick up the markers.
     
  18. mind.or.matter

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    ;) Theres a "N" in COLA now???? haha thanks for the crits though, ima work on it a bit
     
  19. roller4life68

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  20. zale

    zale Senior Member

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    and for the "do simples" crit, is that the only crit people know how to give?