[Broken External Image]:http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5549/gunner56051ib1.jpg Just a quick throw I drew, I write grape but this image is three of my short throws (G.P) together. Crits welcome... Crits: Bop: I think you could do something neat with the bottom left. Seems the most original and interesting to work with. Tern: That doesn't even belong in the toys forum lol! I'm lovin' it! The one with the cracks adds a nice touch. You've definately got somethin'. Cola: Nice, basic lettering, I like it. I agree with Iluvhoodrats though, fatten the "N" and mess with the "C" a bit. Looks good though! Thanks...
Mezn, sry I didn't crit, we posted at the EXACT same time lol. I like it. Just try to keep the letters a bit more consistent in terms of size. Maybe fatten the "N" a bit 2. It's comin along good.
haven't posted any flicks in a while.. whatever [Broken External Image]:http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h59/rdkv23/KRAK.jpg
one last bump lunatic: kind of like the first K and the A if it get's tweaked a bit. that could have some nice potential if you clean it up a bit to flow a little better, like making the two K's match
extremely poorly lit, looks nicer in real light but would be ruined by flash. and i wasnt serious with all those arrows, i wanted to try an oldschool wildstyle approach by just throwing arrows and connecting shit. says RAGE
ive been bombin for a couple months but i havent started doin any big peices or anything.. i sketched these out lemme know what u think Grape1 - Nice style i like it... the only thing i have to say is u should make the top of the P fatter and the Bottom of it skinnier... the one in the middle looks more like a P then the other 2.. post ur full throw i wanna see it [Broken External Image]:http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3842/graf178qk5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/2861/graf176xk8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/898/graf180sa2.jpg im aware of the obvious flaw in that last one... my marker exploded on me
ask-like it looks good glas-imo paint worthy i love the style heres a lil womp a domp [Broken External Image]:http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/1451/bobj8.jpg
mith heres yours did 2 [Broken External Image]:http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/6288/picture007qs0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/743/picture006im4.jpg ask nice simples but on the bottom dont put the lil bits coming off the k's leg krak dont make the a so chunky on the right side bop nice glas thatll be a nice style soon i like it though zeal do simples
Thanks for the crits ask. My full throw isn't very good, I've only done a few but crits are wanted for it. Having a bit of issues with it. [Broken External Image]:http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/8113/hjhj001yo4.jpg Btw crits for ask, I really dig the first 1, but if you needed to do one really fast i'd probably pick the second one. But if i were to give any advice maybe just make the leg of the "K" longer. Thanks...
GLAS needs 3d or shadow, maybe overlap the letters for a throwie, looks decent for what it is though. ASK looks nice but i would take a little more time on it, and if your using a pentel white or paint marker for the white shine i wouldnt, ive tried everything and the only thing that works are white out pens such as these http://www.keysan.com/pictures/big/xpen9556.jpg and once you get used to the squeezing and presure on the ball point tip it can write perfect. BOP, all i have to say is you should figure out what the hell your going to do before you pick up the markers.