Cynic - i really like that name it stands out 4 me, well original. I like your throwup style, lets see your full name???
nase i really like your sketch but i think make the letters less wiggly? cleaner straigher lines, with the letters all bunched closer together for a cleaner, fatter look just my opinion REAL - all ur stuff looks insane to me.. i cant really crit seeing as i dont know how i would improve those! try the normal blackbook section of the forum maybe ??
Real..id say go simpler.. Jar..thats..ugh..amazing..uhg..amazing..amazing .. cula..amazing.. soooo...sum shizzle..i couldnt fit on the O..if i did..it wouldnt flow..soooo.. View attachment 254816 Crits..only on this please..not these exchanges.. View attachment 254817 sorry..im shit at R's and E's View attachment 254818 Bigy..here you goo..
i think everyone on this page fuckin killed it, [Broken External Image]:http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7703/ds004vb7.jpg yeah simple i did just fuckin around, crits mabey?and yeah i know those arrows fills suck, i fergor wut i was gonna do
aimo- your stuff I'd always nice I think it says tar5 but wutever it hot real-go simpler stale- I'm really diggin that fill and that throwie shyts tuff keep that a throwie though and work on simple for you piece and shyt
Bump.. stales...do proper straight simples..like S T O L E ..like that..shuv em toghether..lean um..dont add any funny background or anything..just do one colour..
no beef but aimo wut are you talkin about its just a throwie and he was experiment now if your gonna do a piece go simple but your good like that with a throwie
AIMO man that lettering is beast, lovin it - maybe try a black outline on the bubbles to bring em out a bit more??? just a thought man nice one STALE i really like the bubbles at the top - sick I only just started... this is maybe a bit too complicated for me but wateva... [Broken External Image]:http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/8688/genoggit2.jpg this next one is my simple throwy style.. [Broken External Image]:http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/761/tagsz7mt3.jpg crits will b appreciated, cheers
y doesn't any1 like me i cant get any crits :angry: <_< eng go back to simple piece'n and dont bring the back of your e in that deep on your throwie
work on your lines. they look flimsy. im saying use even pressure with the marker or whatever when your draw. put some confidence in it.
eske ur shits got sum potential but TAKE YOUR TIME dont rush shit and ur 3d's kina fucked cuz the lines aint even.... and i know u dont wanna here it but do simples man, its good practice
practice practice practice quite pleased with this one ( those are white highlights, the pic just doesn't show it that well. ) not so sure how i feel about this one. and i fucked up on the 3d ok... and i know this one is quite similar to the last and i have been painting simliar things, how ever i'm really just trying to get it dialed in. rip them a new one.
thats some real nice shit Chalk and its good to keep the same style juss look at sume he keeps the same style of letters and juss adjusts them in diff. ways that make his peices look diff. wa kinda marker u used for the white hi lights on the 1st one?
tried bars for the first time fucked up my widths so bad..and the s the sketchy ness was one purpose...its easier for me hat way..idk y [Broken External Image]:http://img506.imageshack.us/img506/5886/picture010po3.jpg chalk it all looks good esp. that new one u said u werent sure about