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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
stick to simples
end of the story
stick to simples
end of the story [/b][/quote]
i think it looks good =/ it has good letter structure y do u say simples?
Lose the arrows. I think it would look a lot better without them.
i already gavem y comments in the other post i did
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an exchange i did with mek2
nooooo,his letters structure needs mad work.don't add arrows yet
stick to simples till you get sick of them,use bars to make letters
Ekers drop shadow on the K looks off, and on the tag it almost looks like noek to me.
No all I usually do is simples, I'm just trying out new things, I start everything with bars, then bend the bars and extend some bars, then round em off...This is one of my first attempts at add-ons. Just curious where in my lettering structure is it bad?
dope for me, or in general? [/b][/quote]
sorry i said that wrong.
finally (after 4 pages of bullshit...) something dope.
post more of that stuff.
My new thorwy
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looks pretty nice
get it off your crotch tho
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by the looks of your A i'v just seen your letter structure still needs work,what you've done on the a weren't realy add-ons,but don't try add ons yet.you can add add ons and extensions once you get good
Evil= I really like it, but i am not the best at throwys so i have not critz
Chalk= Pretty dope, just not feelin the H
Remo= like i said not good at throwys but either way looks nice
So here is something i did in class, trying to mess around with the E and C a bit more, tell me what ya think.
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evil that well good, maybe make the fill more even, but i guess ur going for that painty look so wateva man
chalk i fuckin love that orange sketch, cant criticise it at all
ekers loving the throwie not sure about the hole in the middle...
zep0... i really like it... cant really spot nething wrong :s
ok my VERY simple one... i tried to follow crits given to me earlier...
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niggas aint know ,niggas aint kno!....about percs
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fucked up the p on this painting shit
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stick to the simple and slowly develope. dont jump steps.
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percs your stuff i aight but don't try making your s look like a 5
trash:your stuff is dope as usual,keep it up with that style
working on letters,trying new things:
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tell me whats wrong so i can fix it and then i can outline it
percs your top sketch is sick
trash thats fuckin awesome, especially the drops...
South Pole- Just not feelin it, dont like the bit coming off the top of the R, dont like how ther eis a little chip on the left side either, but keep at it, one day you will get it down
Trash- As usual very dope just the C almost looks like a G, but either way dope
Fun- Well the pieces aint that good sorry, just the whole letter structure is off, got to define them and structure them more, i would say go simpiler
Geno- Very nice simples, just a bit of advice, i probaly wouldnt ink simples, just my 2 cents. And their is a part of The g that is a bit thin
Acen it looks good man...Geno keep practicing your on the right path...South your bumps just dont look right, I do like the basic style though...Trash that craze piece is excellent the throwie though, I dont like how it gets bigger and bigger...but the style of it is nice....Pers I agreee with south on no 5 as an S, the simple bookie is your best one, keep practicing it.
Hey heres a progression of how I do every letter.
usually I take more time but thats the basic things I do when developing my letters...Where am I messing up?
Edit:Sorry about size, just realized that.
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i hate colored pencils. and i know the blue one is whack. Crits anyway.
code- the 3d on the bottom of the letters kinda looks fucked up.
trash-dope as hell.
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