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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Ekers.Two.Two

    Ekers.Two.Two Banned

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    stick to simples
    end of the story
     
  2. theprokilla

    theprokilla Senior Member

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    stick to simples
    end of the story [/b][/quote]
    i think it looks good =/ it has good letter structure y do u say simples?
     
  3. Purplepants

    Purplepants Member

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    Lose the arrows. I think it would look a lot better without them.
     
  4. Ekers.Two.Two

    Ekers.Two.Two Banned

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    i already gavem y comments in the other post i did

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    an exchange i did with mek2

    crits plz
     
  5. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    nooooo,his letters structure needs mad work.don't add arrows yet
    stick to simples till you get sick of them,use bars to make letters
     
  6. Zep0

    Zep0 Senior Member

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    Ekers drop shadow on the K looks off, and on the tag it almost looks like noek to me.

    No all I usually do is simples, I'm just trying out new things, I start everything with bars, then bend the bars and extend some bars, then round em off...This is one of my first attempts at add-ons. Just curious where in my lettering structure is it bad?
     
  7. NICCSACC

    NICCSACC Banned

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    dope for me, or in general? [/b][/quote]
    sorry i said that wrong.

    finally (after 4 pages of bullshit...) something dope.
    post more of that stuff.
     
  8. RemoZ

    RemoZ Senior Member

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  9. whoarethereal evil

    whoarethereal evil Elite Member

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  10. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    by the looks of your A i'v just seen your letter structure still needs work,what you've done on the a weren't realy add-ons,but don't try add ons yet.you can add add ons and extensions once you get good
     
  11. Code

    Code Senior Member

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  12. eng

    eng Senior Member

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    evil that well good, maybe make the fill more even, but i guess ur going for that painty look so wateva man

    chalk i fuckin love that orange sketch, cant criticise it at all

    ekers loving the throwie not sure about the hole in the middle...

    zep0... i really like it... cant really spot nething wrong :s

    ok my VERY simple one... i tried to follow crits given to me earlier...


    [Broken External Image]:http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2248/genosimpleye6.jpg
     
  13. percoset fun

    percoset fun Senior Member

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  14. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    stick to the simple and slowly develope. dont jump steps.
     
  15. trashhh

    trashhh Elite Member

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  16. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    percs your stuff i aight but don't try making your s look like a 5

    trash:your stuff is dope as usual,keep it up with that style
    working on letters,trying new things:

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    tell me whats wrong so i can fix it and then i can outline it
     
  17. eng

    eng Senior Member

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    percs your top sketch is sick

    trash thats fuckin awesome, especially the drops... :eek:
     
  18. Code

    Code Senior Member

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    Bump Bump

    South Pole- Just not feelin it, dont like the bit coming off the top of the R, dont like how ther eis a little chip on the left side either, but keep at it, one day you will get it down :)

    Trash- As usual very dope just the C almost looks like a G, but either way dope

    Fun- Well the pieces aint that good sorry, just the whole letter structure is off, got to define them and structure them more, i would say go simpiler

    Geno- Very nice simples, just a bit of advice, i probaly wouldnt ink simples, just my 2 cents. And their is a part of The g that is a bit thin
     
  19. Zep0

    Zep0 Senior Member

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    Acen it looks good man...Geno keep practicing your on the right path...South your bumps just dont look right, I do like the basic style though...Trash that craze piece is excellent the throwie though, I dont like how it gets bigger and bigger...but the style of it is nice....Pers I agreee with south on no 5 as an S, the simple bookie is your best one, keep practicing it.


    Hey heres a progression of how I do every letter.
    ai42.photobucket.com_albums_e323_JollyGreenKid_DCFC0168.jpg ai42.photobucket.com_albums_e323_JollyGreenKid_DCFC0169.jpg ai42.photobucket.com_albums_e323_JollyGreenKid_DCFC0170.jpg ai42.photobucket.com_albums_e323_JollyGreenKid_DCFC0171.jpg
    usually I take more time but thats the basic things I do when developing my letters...Where am I messing up?

    Edit:Sorry about size, just realized that.
     
  20. Captain

    Captain Senior Member

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