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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    :eek: ... mate..playstations..make...my life..apart from football... :D girls :D ...and drink..fucking...ps3 mate... :lol: :lol: :D
     
  2. ESKE one

    ESKE one Senior Member

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    fixion- looks good Nlooks wierd though middle bar should have came down more

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    crits
     
  3. Fixion

    Fixion Senior Member

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    Eske, looks awesome., love that style. But your K has more squiggly stuff then the others. Either add more squigglies on the other letters or reduce the squiggly on the K. :) haha squiggly.
     
  4. alive

    alive Banned

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    g-walh. if ur so goddamn sure of yourself, then why ask for help at all?

    listen to fosale.



    in any case, trassh, i dont rele feel it, ill give u a good crit a little later.

    eske, fixion, go simpler.
     
  5. trashhh

    trashhh Elite Member

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    Eske dont listen to this young lad, it aint awesome
    work on the letters a lot more.. and dont do those squiggles or the bits wher the parts of the letter go back on themselves
     
  6. eng

    eng Senior Member

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    i agree with trash ESKE, ditch the squiggles and keep the k flowing not like cut off, maybe try fattening the letters or squishing them 2gether

    Fixion, not sure about the characters, the lettering is good in that seems to be made of bars of the same width etc but im not really feeling that sharp pointy style thing

    this is like, trying to stay simple... crits please <3 :)
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  7. D Snif

    D Snif Senior Member

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    Im gonna have to agree with Alive and Trash, Eske go simpler, not fully simple, just simpler because those squigglies are way too overdone, and they don't look good at all.
     
  8. sky 5

    sky 5 Elite Member

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    zera - that aint bad . . i think it would look better if your 3d inside of the letters was shaded (had lighter areas like the bottom 3d) . . . maybe try to round teh top loop part of the R, A seems to blocky plain
     
  9. Fosale!

    Fosale! Elite Member

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    yeah, your suckstyle.
     
  10. sky 5

    sky 5 Elite Member

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  11. revolt92

    revolt92 Banned

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    Jealous of you?i'm not the sad fuck who supports liverpool..haha but seriously i am slightly jealous of trash, i think his style is sick.

    eske - No squiggles, especially like that, its looks fucked up, sorry but the truth hurts.

    zera - errr what sky said.


    peace
     
  12. trashhh

    trashhh Elite Member

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    Yea thanks sky i changed the R, and i like it too :D
    i added 3d to the sketch and thinned the S and its a lot better... cba takin a flick and posting it.
     
  13. eng

    eng Senior Member

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    cheers for the crit sky, while i was sketching with a pencil, i tried out the rounded R but it didnt really flow with the atraight corners of the peice, maybe if i slightly rounded off all the corners on other letters it would flow better - whatever

    any more crits appreciated ;)
     
  14. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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  15. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    yeah, your suckstyle. [/b][/quote]
    :lol:
    now fosale.
    i think when its,
    you know...
    that time of the month,
    you should take a break from the forums.
    its not very nice to go off on wittle kids.
    no matter how crappy their throws look.
    :)
     
  16. ESKE one

    ESKE one Senior Member

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    thanks guys for the crits
    howcome i only get these many crits wen my shyt sucks :lol: :) :( :angry:

    but yea i agree to think i went overboard putting those squigly thing in there my bad
     
  17. eng

    eng Senior Member

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    because theres more to criticise???
     
  18. sabe2

    sabe2 Senior Member

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    Do u know if the guy who used to write Cess on this site still rights it or if theres anyone name Sesc?
     
  19. amuin-gcs

    amuin-gcs Senior Member

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    sky 5 is sick. word.
     
  20. sank one

    sank one Senior Member

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    trash - you have a sick style, but some some of your letters look out of place. like some random bars are way thicker then others, like the bottom part of the s. also the way some of letters transition looks kinda forced. just my 2 cents..

    anywho, heres something i did in class and just colord... ignore the highlites, i did em with a white colord pencil. crits on my letter structure would be much appreciated.

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