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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. sketch13

    sketch13 Senior Member

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    EDIT: to Bouncingsoul
    thats looking fresh loving that S
     
  2. C3ZR ONE

    C3ZR ONE Moderator

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  3. N.O.T.E

    N.O.T.E Senior Member

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    that sticker collabo is dope mayne, really liking it
     
  4. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    CEZR-dope collabo...too bad you didn't finish the krylon sketch...:(

    Knews-like your "A"s

    I said in another thread that that post would be my last post of the day but Oh well, this is my last post of today.
     
  5. Chulo

    Chulo Senior Member

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  6. N.O.T.E

    N.O.T.E Senior Member

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    straighten out your letters man and make the proportions right, make that S shorter, and fix the lower hole in the S, notice how the this "S" the spaces are near equivalent. In your S, its distorted, make the hole in the A a lil smaller to. good start tho bro, keep going at it, work on those block letters.
     
  7. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    Yeah note pretty much layed it down cept for one more thing, lose tha bumps homey!


    ok last sketch today then im going to sleep.

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  8. N.O.T.E

    N.O.T.E Senior Member

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    nice shit man..the old english is dope
    your words got nice flow..keep it up and develop your style
     
  9. N.O.T.E

    N.O.T.E Senior Member

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    bump for crits
     
  10. Stim

    Stim Senior Member

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    Earn: good old english text, id like to see some cleaner marker work tho.

    Note: Good proportions, clean lines. gonna color it?

    Done for a friend quick, ignore the handy. Oh and thats not a halo i was testing the marker :lol: .
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  11. nase7

    nase7 Senior Member

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  12. Xsjadox

    Xsjadox Senior Member

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    Stim : I like that!
    Nase : Hmm,just keep working at it,it's not bad.Remove the yellow thing though :p

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  13. HuntingLOLs

    HuntingLOLs Senior Member

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    yeah thats true, but looking at each letter seperatly they are all at some point the same height execpt for the e which, in my humble opinion, is too small.
    im very interested in which weight your paper is?

    here's a cimple sketch i did

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  14. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    NOTE-thanks a lot bro. aight the only thing that really gets me about all the connections and extentions is that the letters are fat and the ext/con are skinny. Try to find spots appropriate for it and try making extentions flow out of letters instead of just being there like a growth ya know? however i am glad that your extentions are proportional and the same on either side, thats what makes them look good. keep it up!

    LOLS-I like that shit, it's easy to read but it's dope at the same time. I like the color combo.

    Stim- thanks, yeah i get sloppy sometims. I like that throwie a lot, the only thing is the L is kinda fat but if you want it like that its cool.

    Fap-I wouldn't put the extention on the T and the one on the f is kinda big. I like it overall tho.

    Asen-already critted this but here goes. The top of the E doesn't go with anything in the picture because nothing else swoops. I like the way you kinda mirror the a on the n's side...i dunno if you'll get what im saying. but keep it up. and lose the charac.
     
  15. gysty

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    garbage- nice i like it.
    note- i like your e but not too keen on the s for some reason ;)
    stim- nice and simple, lookn nice
    xs- doesnt look right to me for som reason, may be the tiny p and huge t
    hunting- love the colouring and nice simple letters.
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    some are bumped from other page
     
  16. moltov

    moltov Senior Member

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  17. moltov

    moltov Senior Member

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    Bump for cheu throwie exchange

    edit* doubble post
     
  18. Fluffy Bunnies

    Fluffy Bunnies Elite Member

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    ^^ moltov
    Awesome... I never used to liek that style of E before but it grows on you... I just don't like the U... it's so skinny compared to everything else.

    I wanna exchange with someone good and not super toy... like maybe Bouncing, BigEl, tricks, cezer... and other people that are in the middleof the road toy.
    Any takers?
     
  19. Stim

    Stim Senior Member

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    Thanks alot for all the kind words guys.

    Oh and those guys aren't toy man, they are more here to lend a helping hand if you know what i mean.
     
  20. Fluffy Bunnies

    Fluffy Bunnies Elite Member

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    Rawr!

    I can't crit anything else on this page without being mean so I am not gonna say it. :lol: