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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. moltov

    moltov Senior Member

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  2. dim

    dim Elite Member

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    i kind like that hsal i see wat you did now when i look at it with all the letters its kind like you wrote it with a chisle tipped marker witch i like

    aimt- im normally not a fan of the euro stuff but that i like
    [Broken External Image]:http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/7237/img0093aa7.jpg
    this is for the exchange with hand its just a simple style but i don rele like it not my best thats for sure
     
  3. ESKE one

    ESKE one Senior Member

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    bump
    don't kno if dim and wose seen it or not
    crits.
     
  4. HSAL

    HSAL Senior Member

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    i prefer the second one to the top. the top lettering isn't all that imo.
     
  5. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    ESKE one- the only decent thing is the "OSE" in "WOSE" everything else isn't too good.
     
  6. Bastardo

    Bastardo Senior Member

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  7. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    do you need crits..^ .. ha :lol: ;)

    ugh..sum new style shit..

    View attachment 262808

    shud i carry on..?..looking to do a big colourfull full pager with karaks..but i want the peice to be decent..

    help Sume ? .. anyone :D
     
  8. HSAL

    HSAL Senior Member

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    that's pretty dope man. loving the style, fill it!! :D
     
  9. trashhh

    trashhh Elite Member

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    Aimt i dont like wher the A joins to the I but apart from that nice
     
  10. Zep0

    Zep0 Senior Member

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    Aimt-your trying to mix jaged and round, and im not really feelin it...the main points that bug me are the top right of the T the A extension to the heart and the top of the A.. and the top left of the M, try dotting your I, I think it will close off some of the empty space...correction the whole right side of the top bar of your T needs work. I actually like the hearts and the thought of the extensions coming off of them, but I dont think they were executed properly, and again I think its the mixture of jagged letters and curvy hearts...maybe not. I can still see your bars, and on that A you had that top bar right, then you chopped it up top with that line across and curved it at the bottom..it donsnt look right now...
     
  11. AteskOne

    AteskOne Elite Member

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    well than you know nothing. all his extensions in that peice are made exactly like tricksforkid's extensions. the letter structure is definitely based on trick's...even the white hightlights in the 3d. someone already called him out on biting his throwy so if you ask me...this is a complete chomp.
     
  12. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    K Atesk..

    Thanks for the crits peeps..and thanks for the look out Zep0 :D

    ima scrap that shit and come up with sumthing..more EURO-IE .. :D
     
  13. trashhh

    trashhh Elite Member

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    ai64.photobucket.com_albums_h194_trashhh__sketches_scan.jpg

    any crits on how to improve this?
     
  14. ThickGravy

    ThickGravy Senior Member

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  15. slinks

    slinks Senior Member

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    anyone think i should continue with this. or have any advice for an M.

    edit: forgot to give crits.

    bastardo and trash i like alot and wouldnt change.

    aimt it looks like it has potential but i think it should be changed alot
     
  16. fredom-writer

    fredom-writer Senior Member

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    GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  17. GnawTheBones

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  18. HuntingLOLs

    HuntingLOLs Senior Member

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    aimt, looks well but the t is strange, before colouring it work on the t imo
    maybe cut off the connection where a and heart meets - make it just stop same length as the i dunno
     
  19. HSAL

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  20. G.SMooth

    G.SMooth Senior Member

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