isreal - not really feelin it looks like a super rush job

Asen - i like it the A reminds me of the H guy named House uses

Hsal - likin the color choices like the gold on black

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any crits?

 

Yeah, change your sig. It isnt funny.

 

ahaha..your sig is awesome ^^^^ i actually like that Z..too..

Fredom..whut you onabout..leave characters..?..i aint done no karaks.. <_< .. the throws dont flow..the S is phat...the K and P look like a load of shit..the Y is okay..

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reposting this..as i have nothing else to post..and its a new page..could i have some opinions on the Fills..

 

I don't feel like outlining anymore and I wanted to post a flick so... Ehh

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I'm going to actually color this one. The letters are going to be green, the bubbles I'll make gray and the dropshadow will just be shaded with a sharpie or something

 

GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP!!!!!!!!!!!

 

bouncing soul thats sick. u gottta exchange with me some time man..

 

have you boned her yet?
edit:too....bouncingsoul
easy the s looks awkward and thin
pie the i has too many extensions
kspy the letters really dont have any flow or common shape for the throw

 

Bounce man really looking forward to that...Nice color selection and I'm actually feelin those bits, usually I dont like em.

Aimt- I love that piece, the letters are nice, and it flows well, the only thing that isnt real great is the I. but still def. fresh.

Zion- you know what your doin for the most part but I would still practice simples for a little while..(i say that because of the I) Still looking good.

Asen - A's a little small, but nice simples.

Smooth man goo SIMPLE....crazy is not good...Even wildstyle, has style...start simple.

Freedom man - AHHH I'm loving everyhting on that page...very nice.

Trash - Dude the only thing I could say is the lines crossing on the R and A but your trying to flow with that H, honestly, I think its a really fresh through, color one and add a forcefield, I wanna see it. Maybe even go out soon? your can control is siiiiick.

Ok new piece, I've been sick so I havn't even picked up a pen or pencil, but here we go... before I ink it, what can I fix? Anything? accepting all crits...

 

Fredom..i am focusing on letters.. <_< ..uggghh.. hence months of simplisitc blissness..boo yah..ugh..im tired

lmfao at Wappen..bahahahhaaaaaaaaa

wut does the word fresh mean..that youve done somthing different..and its like..fresh..new..i donno :blink:

 

no critz

 

Pye, the only thing I dont like is the P, I only wish you would extend it a little more...other than that I love it.

and On mine, I just moved the 2nd extension down on the y too the bottom bar...

 

EDIT: ugh since my other post of crits didn't come up i'll do them again...:

applepie: yeah, i agree - change the P. it doesn't look good like that.

zep0: loose the arrows. the arrows don't really flow with the sketch IMO.

freedom: loving the throwups man, but change the P.
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for my mate katie. very quick sketch.

 

hsal- the t is kinda off, looks more like a wanna be ''j''
w.e good colouring tho

 

I hope your not expecting crits...seeing how you said Nothing about the 10 pieces on this page.

 

one of my posts never showed up; because i did crit. anyways, re-critted.

 

zep0 that peice looks like a tag dont no if you were trying to get it to look like the or not if you were it looks good but if you want it to look more like a peice you should probaly lose the connections between every thing

 

looks sick DUDE. one of the best from U. love it, TNG.UK!

 

i dont like calling bites

espicially on a loved one(bouncing :wub: )
but dude,your B, is totally Bosoe's B

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