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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. memonkey

    memonkey New Member

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    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v68_memonkey_0403070037.jpg

    This is my first real attempt... I just recently got into graf so i'm hella toy. <3 critique...

    and i know the bottom of the k is ugly and there isn't much depth and everything is a little scattered.

    but still... help. :D

    edit: i was also thinking of changing the name to rovok instead of rook... what do you guys think?
     
  2. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    it looks like cursive, but different...not my style, but some people can pull it off well, right now just keep practicing.
     
  3. Pegasus

    Pegasus Senior Member

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    aany idea how to make it better?
     
  4. <~ReSiN~>

    <~ReSiN~> Senior Member

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  5. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    I'd say work more on structure and less on pointless extensions for now, I see you have a lot of ideas, so once you get your structure down pact you're shit could be pretty nice...but there is way too many extensions on your letters, they take up as much space as your letters, so work on that.
     
  6. Murder817Worth

    Murder817Worth Senior Member

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  7. SpekZ

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  8. Murder817Worth

    Murder817Worth Senior Member

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    Go more simple like i did right above u
     
  9. SpekZ

    SpekZ Member

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    Will Try It out
     
  10. Pegasus

    Pegasus Senior Member

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    hahaha sry toy on toy, but u both got good handies. And go simple until you feel you can tweak it and keep tweaking, only in little bits tho, i advise reading the pinned new to graffiti topic. damn new page. Oh wel heres an old skateboard i did.

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  11. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    BOTH OF YOU GO TO THE "NEW 2 GRAFF THREAD"

    and it's "simpler", not "more simple"...sorry had to correct it...

    Spekz- don't do what Murder did...
    <_<
     
  12. Murder817Worth

    Murder817Worth Senior Member

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  13. SpekZ

    SpekZ Member

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    Alright Then ;)
     
  14. Excalibur

    Excalibur Senior Member

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    Damn, I've been working on it for hours, I need help on handstyles, my name is Base2
     
  15. hungr

    hungr Senior Member

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    tenser sketch bookism
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  16. Pegasus

    Pegasus Senior Member

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    lovin the last one, oh and sumo, im doin an exchange with base and im going simpler wit that.
     
  17. .rekon.

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    Since you're just starting out don't try stuff like that. Work on a handstyle and a throwie I think. I'm been paintin since last year but I didn't do it much, I'm just gettin' really into it now. What I'm doin is just working on a throw up that I will be happy with so when I go out bombin with my friends I got somethin' that I'm happy with. Just work with bubble letters. Keep it super simple.

    Also, if you really get into graffiti, you'll probably end up getting a different name later, so just stick to the name you got right now and keep it until you get really good. Then change your name so you don't waste a good name with toy bombs.
     
  18. SpekZ

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  19. Pegasus

    Pegasus Senior Member

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  20. levans

    levans Senior Member

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    pegasus work on ur letter structure....(make certain parts of ur letters the same withdth etc)