He's tryin' to imitate Mewt's style...but yeah, you do need to go simpler, and learn structure (see, I say the same thing every time I crit).
awww sumoe. dont lose faith. haha. i remember when i hated ur style. but now! dope dope. i wish i could say the same for myself. ive been stuck for a month or 2 now on the same old shit. making me angryyyyyyyy.
it's decent...a little curvy, when they should be straighter but, not too bad... Alive- yeah, I remember when you didn't like my shit beforeunsure: ), I used to think my shit was awesome and my letters were so good, but in retrospect, you were right, they were very bad, but I learned, I found I been getting better constantly, it's weird, every sketch I do I like better than the last. but I still got a long ways to go...
[Broken External Image]:http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k303/lil_boxer09/wuze2.jpg 3rd one! Help me out and crit
i went simpler...... i f'd up the e but wat the hell, man i love fridays.... haha that happens to me all the time sumoe. I like a sketch then wen i post it im lik, hmm not so good...... [Broken External Image]:http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5601.jpg
thats not simple man, draw the letters on your keyboard. hopefully ill have a camera this weekend so i can post some sketches...
see, now we can diagnose the problem, you don't have good structure, you need to go simpler, maybe not like your keyboard, but still simpler...
there.... ignore the tooth, accident.... [Broken External Image]:http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5605.jpg
bump no crits [/b][/quote] bump again kemo- wow wat happen man? thats real sloppy i dont know wat to say try pencil or go slwer or something bigel- fresh as usual
kemo - WTF?!?!?! ur last on was okay excpt it looked like it said KOMO the E u fucked up on looked like a pretty good O but other then that keep it up and dont rush to much ur gettin good View attachment 264109 ^^^^^^^^Petey The Wonder Weenie crits?