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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Stim

    Stim Senior Member

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    That's my bad, "full stop" here in Aust means a period ( . ). I meant add a block to the end ...to end the word and to fill that nagative space, because P is naturally a very top heavy left sided letter which makes it hard to end a word with without the letter looking unbalanced. Excuse the dodgy ms paint but what I mean in general is you need to somehow fill this area man in order to balance the whole thing...

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    A period or a dot dot dot would fit pretty well.
     
  2. JackJill

    JackJill Elite Member

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    The middle bar of that S is a little too thin for my liking with respect to the rest of that piece. As well as the bottom half of the S...It's not consistent with the rest of the letters.
     
  3. unify260

    unify260 Senior Member

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  4. beefgerky

    beefgerky Elite Member

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  5. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    Samp got the definition of FUNKAY SIMPLES DOWN...frakin nice mate...that A .. is orgasmic..but the lil bar in the middle of the M..puts the M off for me..the P..." dope " ... im not liking the S neither..but i wouldnt know..cuz i crnt do S's....sssssss...aHAAAA
     
  6. dim

    dim Elite Member

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  7. NICCSACC

    NICCSACC Banned

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    i was expecting to see a few big hearts on your guys stuff....... its all good
     
  8. Ekers.Two.Two

    Ekers.Two.Two Banned

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    rat = start simple, dont try complicated things for now, focus on simple letter
    samp= you got the style, and i like it


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  9. fuckthatgame

    fuckthatgame Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/7000/p1010055ay3.jpg

    noen-very cool man...im likin it. lose the bubbles tho
    samp-i like that lettering....i would say put a question mark....haha shit would b tight as fuck! and they are pretty easy to make into somethin tight!
     
  10. dim

    dim Elite Member

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  11. Hazex

    Hazex Senior Member

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  12. heav

    heav Member

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    First of all its looks like ur usin a ruler..stop that now. secondly jus think about the way that R's and A's are constructed...i.e. the diagonal of the R cud kick off from where the curve meets the left side...i dno experiment, practice etc. maybe with the A u cud try there having a bar across the top so it is in a similar style to the rest of the letters there

    jus sum suggestions
     
  13. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    rulers are fine for sketchin, chill out.
     
  14. Hazex

    Hazex Senior Member

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    yea everyone tell me to start with a ruler and then when ill be ready just dont use a rule anymore..
     
  15. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    what a stupid first post...
     
  16. dim

    dim Elite Member

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    bumping for critisism
    theres nothing rong with usin rulers once in a while
     
  17. Noddles912300

    Noddles912300 Senior Member

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    Love the coloring Dim but dont like the E too much.
    Hazex:use a ruler and draw 2 parallel lines a few inches apart and practice your letters in between them. its like using lined paper but the spacing is bigger. For the R you could put a diagnol line coming out rather than a straight line with a block at the end.
     
  18. crater

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    whats up everyone. ive been working on some throws. id like some crits. and i also did an exchange with um.

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    dye - maybe try bringing your letters closer together.
    fuck the game - pretty tight. i think you shouldve left the bar under the c out, but its still tight.
    ekers - clean. i like it. it loos pretty good.
     
  19. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    crater- change your name

    for one, it's mad gay

    and putting and "8" in the place of "ate" is also pretty queer.
     
  20. crater

    crater Member

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    hahah damnit. i thought it was cool, so i was excited for it. damnit. o well can i atleast get a crit on how it looks.