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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
it says chase, is that a c or a g at the beginnin of ya piece?
chase dont try any connections yet get the letter structure down first
decided to colour something
hungr -- lookin sexy. the U looks kinda like an O though.
ASB -- dopeness. nice to see your stuff again
chulo -- define your letters, drop the connections and work more on your structure.
bastardo -- wish I could do throws like you. clean and crisp. <3 for the topmost one.
sner -- focus on structure and consistency.
and an icky pen free from me:
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Hunger- It's ok just get a new R, don't connect letters, and take off those twirly things.
Samp- I like it, it's just that your M is weird and out of place. Try to bring it down so it's in the same spot as the other letters, maybe lose the P extention to do so.
EDIT: deffff lose that P extention it'd look soo much better.
haha, by the time I was done with the M I realized I had empty space there and tried to fill it. yeah, my Ms are wierd. I gotta work on thems.
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upon further review, i think theres a lot i could do to make those better looking.
any suggestions for anything would be appreciated.
samp, i like your extensions.
hungr, you should try a sketch, where the whole thing has the main aspect of those swirly things. that could be cool. if done right.
guest, i would make that a more defined G.
bastardo, is that what eurostyle is? i like it a lot.
nem, the first would make a quick throwup, the second one...no offence isnt that great. but to fix that, ad some style, some curves or arrows. throw in some random shit of to the sides, little dashes, half circles or whatever man. just let your pencil/pen (or whatever the hell your using) go wild. i remember when i first started...i wasnt so good. also, add some 3d shit, just angle it one way and follow the lines, then fil it in. right now its jsut a lack of style but keep it up. you'll get better. but yea, heres one i just made., tell me what you think.
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slam -- you need to have less random shit going on in your piece. it is inconsistent, the addons, the extensions the connections all look bad. drop them, focus on your letters, cause they need work. do something plain.
nem -- center throw's lookin up. piece is dece, keep your letters in proportion, play around with bending your letters in places, accentuate different parts of em. your fill's given me some ideas though
yea slam you need to scratch everything you've been doing and start over, basic letter structure.
Sorry guys, shouldve posted other ones before, these are are a few i did a couple days ago that are a bit more basic...?
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Samp1e - DAM i luv that.. it is NICe!!1
Bigel- thats fuckin sick
SlamOne- good attempt in the second piece the L obscures the A alot maybe wanna fix that
Panik- nice simples man, that single K you did seems a lil bit off, kinda disproportional in certain areas..gj tho
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420 pen freestyle i did added a green prismacolor second outline..tried not to go to crazy, i really need help with my S's and E's i think...critiques as always are welcomed
Shit i like that N.O.T.E thats nice!!
slam. go simpler bro. get a good throwy that you can drop and then work on harder pieces and bombs.. work with easier letters and dont worry about overlapping and connecting them... keep it simple like CIRAx
big el. tha sketch is fiyah! yu almost should stop posting in the toy forum if u can drop pen sketches like that!
panik. im liking how u keep it basic. not diggin the second k tho.
ase. yoiu have a good start but u do need to work on yer s for sure. and maybe dont draw so many pointless arrows, it takes away from the piece.
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N.O.T.E i like the letters man theres sick and your gettin pretty good with arrows but i dont like the bars connecting the arrows
Bigel DOPE as usaual
Slam one lose the connections
cirus i like that
massivly overlooked. bottom one is fresh as.
Guest...i told you you should ink...youd be nothingwith out my little presence...aha..jokes..
and it makes me laugh at how some of you guys call tthe shit outta Writer ( yeah he a prick ) and offer him out to battles when the kid said he was done with this site....fucking idiots...and the fact that you say all he wants is beef....also after he left...so really...yous was carrying on tha beef... <_<
Hey ras could you tell me that site for cheap paint that WAS in your sig pretty please?
bumping this for awesomeness. sickness hungr.
cirus905 - thats an ill simple man, what part of 905 you reppin?!
N.O.T.E - you know your shits nice, maybe if you made your E a little bit fatter but thats a stretch just to give crits lol.
Big El - you already know...
Panik - your stuffs comin along, work on that N. but i do like how that K kicks out at the end.. just clean it up a bit
I'm going back to simples...
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