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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. near

    near Senior Member

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    newbytj i wrote in the painted forum on your sketches

    i think im handicapped, i cannot appreciate 3d graff...even like water, i mean its ill but id way rather see ANY other style of graff...anyone else with me on this or am i alone lol (not directed at anyones sketches...unless they are 3d o_O)

    anyone wanna exhange...who can piece somewhat competently...
     
  2. ras

    ras Banned

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    ME ME ME ME ME NEAR YOU KNOW I LOVE YOU !!!!!
    ILL DO A SUPER COLUR ONE FOR YOU
    ILL EVEN HAVE A GO AT AN R !!!

    PWWEEESSEEE
    thats if i can peice ..
     
  3. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    View attachment 278084
    cali influence.

    socrates- youre defnitely good at karaks, but im not feeling the theme.

    NewbyTJ-The s is actually good, i dont like the other letters.

    Fd-Thats hot but it's hard to see that it's two letters unless you look close. You should define the bottom of the F's leg more so it looks seperate from the d.

    Fluffy-I love your style, It's so freshhh. I don't know much, but i would say youre on the right track with that.

    bigel- sick karak, it almost looks like it could be a face upside down too.
     
  4. glass

    glass Senior Member

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    Soc: nice characters, like the coloring and shading

    Garbage: i really like the U and the overall flow of that

    yeah so this looked so much cleaner and nicer before i colored it... don't really like it too much, in any case, crits?

    ai16.tinypic.com_4zbyqeb.gif
     
  5. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    Ohhh shit I guess that does look like a U. I was afraid of that. supposed to be an O.

    But anyway, youre getting there with that glas sketch, not bad, just keep all your lines proportional and it'd look allooot better.
     
  6. near

    near Senior Member

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    haha for sure ras ill do it tonight or tomorrow, lady visitor tonight :eek::O
     
  7. AbYSS~>

    AbYSS~> Senior Member

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    Alright havent posted in here for a while...been workin with some bars messin around with styles...

    Newest to oldest.

    Dusk

    Remember ive been in this for like 2months so take it easy, but also provide as much crit as possible :D

    Today after A-history final..messin around lookin for a style to bomb this weekend

    Sketch
    [Broken External Image]:http://aycu02.webshots.com/image/17921/2004623507869198580_rs.jpg

    Just messin around..still havent added the lips lol.
    [Broken External Image]:http://aycu29.webshots.com/image/16588/2004677928440439448_rs.jpg

    Bomb i dropped on the plane back from north carolina...crayola colored pencils...bleh

    [Broken External Image]:http://aycu23.webshots.com/image/17062/2004616579278438636_rs.jpg

    Crits crits crits<3
     
  8. bojangles

    bojangles Senior Member

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    the first pic is good, but i don't like them addons above the sketch, third pic has 2 many colours in it i reckon..i like your style tho
     
  9. BOKAone

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  10. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    View attachment 278099
    Shortened throw.
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    Other piece with pen and 3d.

    Dusk- you got somethin' goin' on with that top sketch, i just dont like how the ends of the letters look kinda like bones. The face is good so far. The bottom sketch, no.

    Suek-Looks like you tried to make a piece out of a handstyle. No offence but it's not that good, too much going on for that skinny of letters, just do simples, you'll get there.
     
  11. BLEACH

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    AbYSS~> that first sketch is looking good.

    i finished this piece this morning

    aimg.villagephotos.com_p_2006_6_1192423_DSCF1873.png
     
  12. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    bleach - do simples, its not working. use bars, check the new to graff threead, i also see your tryingto do the 3d look kinda - get simple basic letters down first.

    suek - make your letters thicker

    garbage - what are the last 2 letters??

    just so im not picture less - messy work in progress criits?

    [Broken External Image]:http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/9186/tutorialja2.jpg
     
  13. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    it says "among". i have no idea how to make a better n and keep it flowing like it is now.
     
  14. AbYSS~>

    AbYSS~> Senior Member

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    bleah i love your handy. your bomb aint bad either. =]
     
  15. AbYSS~>

    AbYSS~> Senior Member

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    ur throwies are good man i like the 2nd one.

    rayseone- its to busy for me but thats prob because it really hasnt been outlined yet. it looks like it could ill.
     
  16. NewbyTJ

    NewbyTJ Senior Member

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    Seyar- looks nice but also hard to see always liked ya shit
    Dusk- i like the top one the most karak pretty dope but try to make lines cleaner dunt be so shaky all u got is time ne ways dunt rush ya self

    NOW I GOT A QUESTION FOR EVERYONE
    I write Seck currently but the name appears to be to generic and i resive no props for originality in the name But i do enjoy writing Sec for short but i am thinking of changing my name to Secur (pronounced as Secure) and still id write Sec for short i just wondering would that still be wrong and do u knw of anyone who writes Secur or anything along that line ...I would prefer hearing that i cant use that name now than in 5 months thanks....Thanks alot:D
     
  17. BLEACH

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    rayesone that sketch is looking good so far

    colored in a piece i did on a previous page
    aa870.ac_images.myspacecdn.com_images01_64_l_9d27ffad454a286afd7984e7ab0a8d25.png
     
  18. SEIZE [reppin yo hood]

    SEIZE [reppin yo hood] Elite Member

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  19. BLEACH

    BLEACH Member

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    seize, i like your letters and patterns
     
  20. BLEACH

    BLEACH Member

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    double post. sorry