i agree with rave, also calm down and dont take it to chaotic yet

 

yea, i usually do go simple, but it doesnt hurt to do some crazy shit. gotta practice sometime, right?
i made it 3-D and started to do an outline, but scanned it first.
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what ever floats your boat man, i love old skool but acasinally i will do a spanish wildstyle. i guess your rite, i hope to see some more simple stuff tho.

 

thanks dream creation

 

yea, i'll post somethin simple in a few minutes... thanks for the advice though, at least your not a dick about it.

 

the 3d on that one isn't half bad, put more time into the lettering now

 

where you from.

 

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is this what you guys ment by simple?

 

no. use blocks. if u dont know what they are, check the new2graff thread.

 

I havent been posting ish in a while...too many pages to go back and crit..so i will get ppl on this page...
gigantic crane...ummm yeah..relax it down a lil bit cuz that stuff is going every sorts of porportions....
and saotin...use blocks cause the way your doing it now it just looks like you took a wieght on the boottoms of the letters...blocks will help...
some of me now...
S is screwed up on mine


more to come...

 

just a page of rambles

props to cear, tricks and pear over last couple of pages shits rele stood out.

losing extensions focusing on letters didnt rele pay off in this sketch:

lost my way home while exploring the galaxy, uk heads shud know about that!!

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deadpoolzer- nice n simple, try and use a variety of o's

 

looks good except for the t. color it!

 

guest- that shits hot, the 3d design is fuckin trippy

 

came out lookin' shitty, but whatever.
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EDIT: Rave i still say use proportions first..and the structure of your letters need a lil help too....the r's leg is way too small and the top of the e is HUGE...just work with proportions..
guest i like it all cept for maybe the heavyiness of the t and the e's leg maybe...not sure...
and yes i realize nice and simples....unless your actually sying its Nice and also simple.....then i wont be so heated lol...i did some other shit a while back with feo and something else...just random letters....filled in the stole one to..but it didnt turn out good..

 

the stole one looks good with color

 

thanks bro....have you done any new sketches lately or have i missed them in previous pages?

 

deadpool: that first one is sick, all the stuff you say you dont like i think is pretty good. its a good simple design but i dont like the S. it'd look good in paint though.