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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. knewsince.

    knewsince. Senior Member

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    on the first one it looks like the T is an F. the 2nd one, its looks ok...except the top right of the A looks like its been bittin off and its more slanted then all the other letters
     
  2. Wutchoogonnadoo?

    Wutchoogonnadoo? Banned

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    ill get onit soon Alive..

    Knewsince.. i like that B on the right..has sumwhat decent fllow to it..keep it up..i actually like it...just the middle bar there is like a lil hiuccup..get rid of it..then sketch your other name like that..remebering the flow !

    FreakShow..love that top euro..!!!!!...but that A is like sum ARE4 shit
     
  3. Bomber444

    Bomber444 Senior Member

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    yea the right b is really nice id like to see a peice with that style
     
  4. Kayone707

    Kayone707 Moderator

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  5. Wutchoogonnadoo?

    Wutchoogonnadoo? Banned

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    ISNT MINE !

    here you go alive..
    it got really hekitk at sum points...and i didnt know where your letters went..
    where its yellow..it where i went wrong so ignore that..

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    i think youll get the idea...when going into the actual extensions...kinda flair the pen..to emphise the extension..
     
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  6. alive

    alive Banned

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    haha wow, thanks a lot. seriously. thats gonna be a big help. u actually missed a bunch of the extensions, but A.) i get the idea, (i think?) and B.) i actually might use some of that in the future, u made mad connections for me by accident, that i hadnt thought of. knews told me i should continue the line up the left of the C. i dunno. we'll find out after i try all this 2night, after i get that sharpie.
     
  7. Bomber444

    Bomber444 Senior Member

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    Yea Wutchoogonnadoo thats looking nice alive u should finsh that yo if u need a sharpie hit up the nearest Michaels art supply. I hear they r having a 100% off sale. haha
     
  8. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    Finally finished inking it.I'm wondering whether or not to do the background though,I don't want to ruin the piece.
     
  9. knewsince.

    knewsince. Senior Member

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    wutcho, i really like that. Ok, dont kno if this is the thread for this but this is where it came up, u said u should do a peice like that. when i draw my letters, i dont kno if i should over lap them or stuff like that and that makes me cautious when doing peices...any help

    drak..noooooooo
     
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  10. alive

    alive Banned

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    drak simple simple simple simple

    knewssince, that is not "wutcho"'s that is mine, he just put the outline on it. lol.

    and yes you should overlap.
     
  11. knewsince.

    knewsince. Senior Member

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    oh, sorry alive...still like it :D
     
  12. stales

    stales Senior Member

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    and drac.... dont get too stoked on ur self man, but on the bright side the colors are aight, but the structure is just off, you dont rly have to do ''SIMPLES'', but dont get to crazy on ur next peice
     
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  13. knewsince.

    knewsince. Senior Member

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    Why The Fuck Is It So Big!?
     
  14. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    Are you saying I should do more simple pieces?Or are you saying my piece is simple simple simple simple?

    I really don't like doing simples,I've moved on from then.I started writing on paper about a half a year ago and I've progressed since then.Why should I have to do simples now.
     
  15. knewsince.

    knewsince. Senior Member

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    wow...you've progressed to that?...scary.
    Hes saying u should go simple because that....thats just gross.
     
  16. stales

    stales Senior Member

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    i have know fuckin idea man
     
  17. alive

    alive Banned

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    because regardless of whether or not you DID move on, you werent, and arent, READY to move on. so yes, i think you should go back, and do more simple pieces. your letters are weak, and you just hide it with colors, and mad useless shit. youll fool your girlfriend, but any real writer can see right through it.

    the truth hurts, i know, i hate being an asshole. but uve got potential, and if u dont stop, eventually youll make it. we need more writers in the world.
     
  18. ~Saoten154~

    ~Saoten154~ Senior Member

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    thats humungus, it says dope right? the fill looks sick but id ditch the arrow on the left side of the "d"
     
  19. Wutchoogonnadoo?

    Wutchoogonnadoo? Banned

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    Saoten...you giving out the wrong adivce ... your saying everything is dope and amazing and great when soemthmes the piece is whack...dont be scared to tell people if its whak or not..and to go simple......hint hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...

    Stales...its whack

    ....nt
     
  20. ASB_ONE

    ASB_ONE Senior Member

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    cear man i dig ur shit think u jus went too mad with extensions i rekn its definatly an encouragable thing to do tho wen ur at ur stage cos otherwise how you guna find where they fit ya know? keep at it bro guna be mad wen it flows nice.

    other than that theres some weird shit on this page so heres a G,

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