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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    bump.
     
  2. dizzle_d

    dizzle_d Senior Member

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    Teze- all those are fire man. keep 'em comin
    Trash- thats hot as hell man but the T seems to small although it does flow with the H's bar....
    Ref- last ones pretty nice, colors kindof remind me of Esk's though

    OKAY. so I didn't get many crits so here we go
    [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/6438/img1265po5.jpg
    crits on the letters
     
    Last edited: Jun 14, 2007
  3. Make•

    Make• Senior Member

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    trash- that shit is fucking nice. I know your supposed to keep the letters all one size but that style is fine I don't mind the size difference... everything from that 3D to that handstyle is on point man.

    merk- that looks good, I think the colors do alot for it though. it looks like your best letter is the E. I don't know if it's just me but the R is a bit awkward, keep at it though.
     
  4. Vice

    Vice Senior Member

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    i think the R and the K are the strongest but the E and the M dont fit...
     
  5. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    simonwuzere why dont you post some work?
     
  6. nero122

    nero122 Elite Member

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    the m looks outa place n the top of the 'e' looks a bit shit
    other than that its niceeeee
     
  7. panduh

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  8. Casa45

    Casa45 Senior Member

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    Trash that is hot.. but the "S" doesnt look good.
     
  9. Casa45

    Casa45 Senior Member

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    sorry for double post... but MERK i think its much better.. but i would make your letters a little rounder.. they look too stiff... kna what i mean...
     
  10. emokid

    emokid Senior Member

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    trash, thats proper nice, the shading sets it offfff

    ai197.photobucket.com_albums_aa215_pork_album_DSCN6519.jpg

    ai197.photobucket.com_albums_aa215_pork_album_DSCN6520.jpg

    ai197.photobucket.com_albums_aa215_pork_album_DSCN6521.jpg

    them three are just titles in my art books, basically the only sketches i've done in a while.

    ai197.photobucket.com_albums_aa215_pork_album_DSCN6518.jpg

    and i hope amk doesnt mind but i found myself writing his name, and then i thought i should ink it, and then i thought i might as well colour between the lines.
     
  11. trashhh

    trashhh Elite Member

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    cheers for all the good commentss

    Merk keep workin on it its lookin good.

    yea casa the S is the worst letter i dont know how to do them half the time

    edit: thanks emokid, really liking the 'designer' sketch and the Amkah is well nice
     
  12. Casa45

    Casa45 Senior Member

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    Yah "S"s do suck sometimes...
     
  13. Deadpoolzer0

    Deadpoolzer0 Senior Member

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    Edit..Panduh....use proportional bars and stick to keyboard stuff...just dont stop trying...and alos dont take chunks out of the letters yet..just use bars..
    Ok so here is my entry for the ABC battle...seriously done in about 2 hours lol it wsa the cards behind it that took time...basically games for a 52 card deck are on the bottom of the letters to tie it into a theme....but the letters dont really match or flow well....
    ai165.photobucket.com_albums_u78_deadpoolzer0_DSC04923.jpg
     
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  14. dizzle_d

    dizzle_d Senior Member

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    hky.

    thanks for the crits...

    emokid- those are all real nice, I love em
    deadpoolzer- It looks like the letters are from best to worst- like the A is good, B is alright and the C is horrible... the cards look proportioned well

    :rolleyes:
     
  15. alive

    alive Banned

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    its a throw battle. . . . .
     
  16. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    poolzer your b and c need some work man.. it looks like you took more time on the a and then just did the b and see to finish up.
     
  17. near

    near Senior Member

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    trash the only thing i dont like about your pieces is how some of the letters "borrow" part of the other letters without attaching to them...it doesnt look right, you used to do it to your R all the time now your fixed that and did it to your S, if you fixed that up i think it would look better...
     
  18. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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  19. near

    near Senior Member

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    ^^ whats it say?
     
  20. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    its a Q and an F