exchange with tezr: View attachment 284141 for the asek battle: View attachment 284142 karak CRAP: View attachment 284143
View attachment 284144 uhhh- different style but its hot. dusk- too many lines in the letters. its a mess. bawk- nothing wrong with those simples. shame- love your throw. baze- hot, only the A could be better.
haha obviously yours is more clean mines sloppy as fuck and its only liek 2 inches long so it looks even worse blown up, but thats not the issue im concerned about, im not telling you to change it or nothing, just pointing out its the basically the same G i use...
It's not really. Yours is more of a square shape, his is triangular. Not to mention a host of other differences.
So do i. Not as good as your other stuff though. It's basically the same g everybody in the toy thread uses. You can't really bite a base letter that's made almost straight from bars. Actually I went back and looked, they're not really the same at all. His is better. Yours kinda looks like a 'c' with cancer.
Uhhh, I think yours is better than mine hah View attachment 284163 View attachment 284164 View attachment 284165 View attachment 284166 Kinda hard to see in the 3rd one, the E is lowercase and it lowered, the little thing above it is actually the left leg of the W, which stretches over. Also ignore the insanely fucked up dropshadows
Bouncing- Like the swirls but to much of a good thing is a bad thing, idk, the E is fucking fire though, the throw is hot too Garbage- nice simple, 3d is on point, needs to be cleaned up though, your lines are really shaky and jagged Glas- I like the first one, not so much the second one Dusk- not really feeling that style man, idk something about fat letters with extremely pointy tips dont look good, and the K is all messed up Baze- nice man now fill that bitch Tricks- its good, plain and simple, doesnt excite me though Shamee- sick throw man Uhhh- like the style, maybe lose the drips? idk nice though Damn, went to sleep and woke up theres like 4 new pages already, this thread is really busy eh? anyway i didn't get any crits on this piece before it got swamped, so here: [Broken External Image]:http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/7288/dsc00026rf5.jpg Oh and AMK, thanks for that little guide thing man, and no hard feelings