What?
bump for more crits.

 

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uhhh- different style but its hot.

dusk- too many lines in the letters. its a mess.

bawk- nothing wrong with those simples.

shame- love your throw.

baze- hot, only the A could be better.

 

Bump

grabage: nice simples but the A and O look a bit smaller than the otheres

 

haha obviously yours is more clean mines sloppy as fuck and its only liek 2 inches long so it looks even worse blown up, but thats not the issue im concerned about, im not telling you to change it or nothing, just pointing out its the basically the same G i use...

 

It's not really. Yours is more of a square shape, his is triangular. Not to mention a host of other differences.

 

"Asek"? I like these swirly things

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It all looks good until you get past the E, where it looks extremely cluttered. at least to me.

 

So do i. Not as good as your other stuff though.

It's basically the same g everybody in the toy thread uses. You can't really bite a base letter that's made almost straight from bars.

Actually I went back and looked, they're not really the same at all. His is better. Yours kinda looks like a 'c' with cancer.

 

i really like that E, and the swirls are hot

 

little somethin simple i did at work

 

You know, I wouldnt like that were it not for the bars on either side. They set it off.

 

shiiiit.
why should i even enter?

 

uhhhh you up for an exchange?

 

ay niccsacc back in town hunh? whats good homes?

 

loving it kid.
i'll have yours up soon.

 

Uhhh, I think yours is better than mine hah

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Kinda hard to see in the 3rd one, the E is lowercase and it lowered, the little thing above it is actually the left leg of the W, which stretches over. Also ignore the insanely fucked up dropshadows

 

Crits?

Glad to see Niccsacc is back. Bigel, dope shit as usual.

 

It has a cyberpunk kinda feel to it.. I dig it.

 

Bouncing- Like the swirls but to much of a good thing is a bad thing, idk, the E is fucking fire though, the throw is hot too
Garbage- nice simple, 3d is on point, needs to be cleaned up though, your lines are really shaky and jagged
Glas- I like the first one, not so much the second one
Dusk- not really feeling that style man, idk something about fat letters with extremely pointy tips dont look good, and the K is all messed up
Baze- nice man now fill that bitch
Tricks- its good, plain and simple, doesnt excite me though
Shamee- sick throw man
Uhhh- like the style, maybe lose the drips? idk nice though

Damn, went to sleep and woke up theres like 4 new pages already, this thread is really busy eh? anyway i didn't get any crits on this piece before it got swamped, so here:
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Oh and AMK, thanks for that little guide thing man, and no hard feelings