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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Sou - Mvd

    Sou - Mvd Senior Member

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    Work on making all your bars the same width. Start by doing the letters on your keyboard, you've tried to distort them to much and you need to take a step back.
    Don't do that top extension you did on the first sketch to your S, it looks like a 3.
    Orange is a terrible colour to use to outline in both those sketches. A green would make them pop more. Try looking at a colour wheel when picking colour skeme and pick contrasting colours to the fill colour for outlines.
    In regards to your 3d, next piece you do put a dot anywhere around your piece about 2-3 inches away from it. Now, any side that is exposed to that draw a 1 inch line towards the dot. All your lines should be pointing at the same point. Don't do what you did in your first sketch with the blue until you are more comfortable with 3d, those lines should also all be going in the same direction though.
    Keep practicing and go simple!
     
  2. [breakout]-azer

    [breakout]-azer Senior Member

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    cheers for the crits.

    here a quick simple i did.

    ai191.photobucket.com_albums_z145_breakout_azer_STA60008.jpg
     
  3. AliasL1A

    AliasL1A Member

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    I think your B has too much going on with it. Other than that, I like it. Maybe twist the S a bit more to your style

    I recommend writing it out without bars extraordinarily fast, and adding your litttle handwriting nuances to it a little at a time, then exaggerating just a bit.
     
  4. ESCO1

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  5. Lamure

    Lamure Member

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    Don't put spaces in between parts of each letter.
    Be consistent in letter width, etc.
    I like the style though.
     
  6. Stim

    Stim Senior Member

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    i like the c actually chalk, it matches the k so the piece has some symmetry.
     
  7. Ez*OnE

    Ez*OnE Senior Member

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  8. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    ez- bring the o out to more its hideing a behind he z and also you could brig the z ou too.
     
  9. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    Right then..Motherly duties

    Ezone...its aiight...i dont know much bout throws...bu ti don know you need to start simple and evelop from there with htme..look at sum old skool Sane , Ja throws...theyre basic bubble letters..whic are both kool and funkay

    Stim...your right..but there aint that much symmetry


    Esco....do straight up SIMPLES...when i say SIMPLES i mean like this

    ESCO

    no shit up and down side to side
    straight up blocks..
    and use bars to consturct your letters
    go to the new to graff thread to see what i mean by bars

    Breakout Azer....god damn....no offence...but its pretty baaad...drop everything...3d , colours the lot....focus on your letters only...do what i told ESCO..

    Oh and

    Ez....that bottom karak freestyle is aight..not my style but aight

    sooo..page one of the 12oz International Bulk Exchange is done !!

    View attachment 284620

    Wienot
    Amk

    be prepared for more !
     
  10. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    amk- hs sik man i like the 3d i think you should of kept i the same colour tho, other than tht i think its sik man.
     
  11. dizzle_d

    dizzle_d Senior Member

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    ohh shit man thats so fresh! I'm at camp right now on tha comp hahaha.
    keep that work comin looks so good.I TOLD YOU those colors are like gushers.

    freshhh
    keep it comin
     
  12. krazzie_ammo

    krazzie_ammo Senior Member

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  13. amk

    amk Elite Member

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  14. krazzie_ammo

    krazzie_ammo Senior Member

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  15. Jroc1993

    Jroc1993 Elite Member

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    yur R is too small compared to the rest of the letters but i like it overall
     
  16. exhale

    exhale Senior Member

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  17. ESCO1

    ESCO1 Member

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  18. bouncingsoul

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  19. EKE

    EKE Senior Member

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  20. EKE

    EKE Senior Member

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    ai94.photobucket.com_albums_l114_NotoriusSnL_Graffa144.jpg
    Crits please