Work on making all your bars the same width. Start by doing the letters on your keyboard, you've tried to distort them to much and you need to take a step back. Don't do that top extension you did on the first sketch to your S, it looks like a 3. Orange is a terrible colour to use to outline in both those sketches. A green would make them pop more. Try looking at a colour wheel when picking colour skeme and pick contrasting colours to the fill colour for outlines. In regards to your 3d, next piece you do put a dot anywhere around your piece about 2-3 inches away from it. Now, any side that is exposed to that draw a 1 inch line towards the dot. All your lines should be pointing at the same point. Don't do what you did in your first sketch with the blue until you are more comfortable with 3d, those lines should also all be going in the same direction though. Keep practicing and go simple!
I think your B has too much going on with it. Other than that, I like it. Maybe twist the S a bit more to your style I recommend writing it out without bars extraordinarily fast, and adding your litttle handwriting nuances to it a little at a time, then exaggerating just a bit.
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Don't put spaces in between parts of each letter. Be consistent in letter width, etc. I like the style though.
Right then..Motherly duties Ezone...its aiight...i dont know much bout throws...bu ti don know you need to start simple and evelop from there with htme..look at sum old skool Sane , Ja throws...theyre basic bubble letters..whic are both kool and funkay Stim...your right..but there aint that much symmetry Esco....do straight up SIMPLES...when i say SIMPLES i mean like this ESCO no shit up and down side to side straight up blocks.. and use bars to consturct your letters go to the new to graff thread to see what i mean by bars Breakout Azer....god damn....no offence...but its pretty baaad...drop everything...3d , colours the lot....focus on your letters only...do what i told ESCO.. Oh and Ez....that bottom karak freestyle is aight..not my style but aight sooo..page one of the 12oz International Bulk Exchange is done !! View attachment 284620 Wienot Amk be prepared for more !
amk- hs sik man i like the 3d i think you should of kept i the same colour tho, other than tht i think its sik man.
ohh shit man thats so fresh! I'm at camp right now on tha comp hahaha. keep that work comin looks so good.I TOLD YOU those colors are like gushers. freshhh keep it comin
ezone - make block letters amk = dont really like the letters, tehy are too overshadowed by the colours, if that makes sense. [Broken External Image]:http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/5280/147jx4.jpg i havent done anything in ages, so i did this quick before i go out
Thanks Dizzle , Krazzi , Made so you ca see the leeters View attachment 284622 .. View attachment 284623 Krazzie..its simple ?
krazzie maybe make the top left arm of the y flat like the right? amk i like it but what did you use for the keyline and the highlights? [Broken External Image]:http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z192/sewr11/DSC00125.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z192/sewr11/DSC00123.jpg
Right AMK, is this better? [Broken External Image]:http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/3585/image013mediumlc6.jpg
its a good start but the A looks rounded compared to the other letters and it kinda looks inconsistant try to keep your letter either mostly rounded or mostly angled