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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. kelio

    kelio Senior Member

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    amk: i think the character is good. maybe add some wild hair?
    Drakula: your progressing alot.
    AnteUp: looks good. different color force field. and bring it closer to the letters.
    what_one: i like it. keep it up. looking good so far. add a drop shadow and tht shit will be dank.


    heres what i got so far.
    my first try with block letters. trying to keep it simple.
    ai181.photobucket.com_albums_x108_hoop_blah_3fb9cda4.jpg
    and heres my throw. still working on it though.
    ai181.photobucket.com_albums_x108_hoop_blah_91fb6d3e.jpg

    critz please.
     
  2. d_g

    d_g Elite Member

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    Shamee's advice below is good, I also find the font Impact on word is a good one to copy to help learn structure.
     
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  3. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    crits

    when u make ur letters simple the thing u wanna do is make it a nice width not to skinny, then u wanna try as hard as u can to make them look as the same as the letters on your keyboard.

    ohh yeh. try and keep neigative space to a min...make the overall look, look better.
     
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  4. Genetic

    Genetic Member

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    amk- the face is awesome, really like the style


    was messing around tonight and sketched this up
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    still trying to figure out the flow of more complex letters
     
  5. Sou - Mvd

    Sou - Mvd Senior Member

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    Go so much simpler, it looks like you didn't pick up on the use of bars very well although it does have some potential. Make your letters proportionate to each other, loose the add ons and work on getting some good base letters before you star moving onto more complex styles.
     
  6. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    you write ket or your just doing it? there's a pretty up ny writer that goes by ket.. but if you dont just work on the way your letters overlap dude.
     
  7. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    for uhhhhhhh
    rela
    ai41.photobucket.com_albums_e276_DannyHartu_Picture001_2.jpg
    for nero
    saine
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    for the battle
    asek
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    kore 123- you use to do some good simples what happen? your lines are real shaky go back to what you use to do.
    Genetic- new 2 graff thread.
    Blah- use a ruler to forn your letters also go to the new 2 graff thread.
     
  8. what_one

    what_one Member

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  9. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    nah who tha fuck deleted mah post? a person aksed wat mah sketch sed an i told him, tha fucks wrong wit that?
    teze-rela peice is crazy homie, tight shit, saine peice is tight, aint feelin tha asek sketch
     
  10. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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  11. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    black book? maybe not but whatever.

    what one- sweet simples but work on that force field.

    sezer- always feeliln your shit. that asek is ill.
     
  12. kelio

    kelio Senior Member

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    Edward"Sezer"Hands: i love them all.
    what_one: glad you added a shadow really good simples.
    00-made-00: thanks so much for taking the time to write the guide it will help out alot. i will defiantly use it. going to start working on my simples right now.
    Fube: your have the hottest shit. thats it.

    sorry i post so much. i just have all day to do this shit. so yeah. and i think i am progressing. if theres a problem with me posting so much just let me know ill stop posting so much.

    heres my throw. i messed with the a. this picture sucks sorry.
    critz please.
    ai181.photobucket.com_albums_x108_hoop_blah_c1b8e326.jpg
     
  13. Kore123

    Kore123 Senior Member

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    i know thanks for tellin me that this was my first sketch in like 6 months and i dont know it coulda been the fact that i was in a car doin it......or that i was slightly intoxicated lol but yeah i was just lookin at my old ish and imma go back to that...thanks it means alot you and a few other people on here are the ones that inspired me and i took all your guys advice to get better....so thanks for that (you, bounce, sume, and shiit he keeps changin his names i think it mnk or somethin now use to be amio)
     
  14. emel

    emel Senior Member

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    wow ante youve gotten much better man i just think the real thin part on the bottom of the A looks kinda weird and it just looks sketchy cause you let the prisma bleed like that on the inside but yeah you should paint that sheet
     
  15. Casa45

    Casa45 Senior Member

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    This is looking good. but the hand and lower lip needs some work...

    Are people on this site getting worse... or am i getting better? LOL
     
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  16. tense

    tense Elite Member

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  17. Cali

    Cali Member

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    The first E is whack it looks like scribbles the second one could use a lil work too....the rest looks aight though...i wouldnt go with yellow..but thats just my opinion..It just doesnt look crisp unless you use like prismacolor markers..
     
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  18. siZo

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  19. d_g

    d_g Elite Member

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    Keep the chat to PMs please guys.

    Cheers.
     
  20. MAST

    MAST Elite Member

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    ai5.photobucket.com_albums_y165_seventh672_IMG_0255_1.jpg

    says MIA

    i don't really ever color pieces unless i'm trying to decide what colors would look good to paint, so i'm not really used to it, so coloring skills definitely aren't a factor here. and i ran out of turquoise.