sizo - big easy- tense - u wanna go simple yeh. u wanna like keep ya letters level, same thickness and height. because u need to kno your stucture in your letters. just loose the addons and arrows and shit like that. putting addons done make no ones work better. cuz most of all ur guys work is not amazin, basic shit.yeh well someone had to tell yah. so it has to be me. well now u kno all u can do is get betta. your simples should be lookin like this. mast - your work looks like inks. well reminds me of it. i aint sayin that they bit u. but it all good. i think you should go alot simpler like make look like letters first that havin wavey lines. so you should go simple as well reli... crit from a king.....yeh right.
first of, no need to post the whole process of colouring simples - waste of space on here.. its just simples theres nothing special there. 2nd. dont use a small L for blocks when rest are capital letters and 3rd check the 3d on the b, the bottom of the round part is wrong because the line is longer than the other ones which determine the size of 3d. you have to find the point where it spawns from and make it same length as the rest, its one of the more tricky parts of 3d but with practice it will come out good
Made...nice fading man....you shud work on your straight lines... Mast...do blokcs like Made demeonstrated with the Blah block Sizo...same for you ...do simples... coloured in View attachment 285368 peace
amk- i like how u put only one blue dot out of all the red ones i think you are rele starting to find your way around shading and showing dimension in your characters. mast- you need to find some letter structure go simple. tense- block letters. sizo- block letters.
no they shouldnt...these simples are all wrong. when doing simples you should first- try and keep them straight and not slanting down like yours, and second- all the same thickness. the only letters that are the same thickness are the E's. and besides doing your simples without spaces inbetween the bars like this is better practice for learning a throwy than learning how to peice. space the bars in your letters out so you can better understand the structure of the letter. for examples the S should consist of 5 bars total. 2 vertical and 3 horizontal. the vertical bars are practically non exsistant. like i said try spacing them out.
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DOPE! But maybe get rid of the interlocking lines or just get rid of one or two,they're obstructing the view of the letters.Rest is good.
Dome-i like the colors u choose nice stuff amk-thats dope but y is the finger so fat here a little pice i tried View attachment 285386
what - like your throw demo - nice but try not to hide your letters too much cerex - lookin good jackjill - pretty good for a simple did this yesterday... [Broken External Image]:http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/342/003009lj7.jpg
On a newspaper or mag? I love that look it's so grimey, and cheap! Your letters seem to shrink as you go along...And I'm not sure I would have put the vert part of the arrow so far away from the J. I like the colours though. I don't much like the negative space. Bottom negative of hte E is too angular compare But yeah over all ( because I cant crit the rest of your work, I gotta go) It's bomb. Go paint it. gogo!