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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Jroc1993

    Jroc1993 Elite Member

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    see baze knows what hes talkin about, it seems like everyone on here is expecting the same style but i agree with sizo too i gotta fix my M and O.
    those are some dope throws too baze
     
  2. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    baze - feeling the colered right one, looks real nice, not feeling the pencil ones, the left one is alrightbut the b looks wierd.

    morne - lose the lumps. and sort the sizing out

    matfoo - get some structure first man, your letters just are too pointy and structureless

    crits i guees?
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    and just screwing around
    [Broken External Image]:http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/3641/dsc00307ka8.jpgprops to the new mods, this topic is looking much better now, and also school is done for me so expect to be seeing lots of new shit
     
  3. siZo

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  4. Jroc1993

    Jroc1993 Elite Member

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  5. mattFOO

    mattFOO Senior Member

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    ya looks better.. but do u see how u ended the black shadow on the E try to end it like that on the M

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    rayse i can think of any crits.. looks good... baze you always have good art.i cant crit any of u.. morne i tried a throw with your name.. these were really quick throws.. and dont crit the word zoom... i was upside down when i did it.. toying around. i doodle when im on the phone.[Broken External Image]:http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/9249/45bv2.jpg
    i think im gonna put some effort into something tonight.. ill post it up later guys.
     
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  6. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    matfoo make your pics bigger, its hard to crit them when they are so small, and the blue and red is blue and orange the picture just fucked it up,

    so im not critless - morne make your letters the same size, your e is much smaller than your m

    not directed at anyone but if your gonna post something up, put effort into it,
     
  7. Casa45

    Casa45 Senior Member

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  8. tense

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  9. tense

    tense Elite Member

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    just try workin on gettin less wiggly lines, doin simples is a good way, but watevr works for u is good too
     
  10. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    Cyto- i'm glad you basically understand what simples are now clean em up some more don't make your letters get bigger.
    jroc- I told you before simple block letters doing that bubbly ish is not going to help you at all. Simple basic letters.
    Baze- stick with the bottom right one maybe make the holes a little smaller.
    rayseone- great coloring scheme. You remind me of sume your progressing nicely which im sure i told you before. But look at the SEY and than look at the AR not flowing well. Fix the size of the A and R.
    matfoo- go simpler.end of story.
    tense nice simples fix the s.
     
  11. Jroc1993

    Jroc1993 Elite Member

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  12. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    i have millions of throwups.. i few of them i dont really remember how to do. this one's my favorite though.

    ai190.photobucket.com_albums_z227_bazer6_ebook_SP_A0901.jpg

    jroc what does your non simples look like?
     
  13. Jroc1993

    Jroc1993 Elite Member

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    ive never tried non simples cuz i have no clue where to start ive just been workin on tags and throws
     
  14. Casa45

    Casa45 Senior Member

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    BAZE that "B" is UGLY
     
  15. EKE

    EKE Senior Member

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    CRITS PLEASE
     
  16. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    you gotta not do hwat your doing right there and stick to some simple letters.. and we both gotta work on our handstyles. ;)
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  17. NewGraffer905

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    ai164.photobucket.com_albums_u1_NeoGarland_Tonic_Piece.jpg

    My first attempt at something other then a tag. Crits please.
     
  18. TAZM

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    baze your shit always looks dope.

    tonic you need to keep practicing.

    crits please.
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    wack "M":
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  19. NewGraffer905

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    I like the first one, better.

    I tried to improve mine...

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  20. scoot

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    take the splash thing out of the backround and put it to the side for now.. then just work on getting the lettering down no need to waste ur markers on every little thing you draw.. also.. i dont like how ur letters break up near the end