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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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  2. Jroc1993

    Jroc1993 Elite Member

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    that J is lookin like a W to me but yur handie is dope
  3. N.O.T.E

    N.O.T.E Senior Member

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  4. Stim

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  5. what_one

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  6. jersOneTIC

    jersOneTIC Senior Member

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    Borg - Nice colors
    Stim - Nice character
    NOTE - not feeling the first one, but the second is tite
    Big_Pimpin - try making the letters even and shorter
    i'm trying this new style...crits?
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  7. hungr

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    did this for my buddy who writes Mortem (kinda drunk when i did it)
  8. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    Jers-feelin' your other style better...this one could be good after you work with it, though.

    Hungr-dope, just a little messier than usual, well, the lines are shaky, but you were drunk so w.e.. lol.


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    second piece since i started, a week ago.. missed the deadline for asek battle and stopped workin, to work on next battle, please just give me some constructive crits and thats not my handstyle, no idea where it came from honestly..
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  10. Sou - Mvd

    Sou - Mvd Senior Member

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    You don't have to be ashamed of your handstyle. I'm sure the bombing science shout out didn't just pop out of anywhere. You've gotten to far ahead of yourself, check out the new to graff thread, and learn to use bars to properly form your letters.
  11. amk

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    Hungr...your sooo good..
    Tazm...keep em up those simples...but dont waste your time colouring them...aaaight
  12. dizzle_d

    dizzle_d Senior Member

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    mourn- lookin fresh as hell, I like where you goin with the first one.
    Stim- that charaks dope
    Jers- I'd say work on that R
    Hungr- nicee
    Trust your hands- go... to the new to graff thread....
  13. Drakula

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  14. Chalk

    Chalk Senior Member

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    the left side of your A seems fat compared to all the others...
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  16. Bomber444

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    first off resize the image, but since i have photoshop i did. I'd say go simpler, get rid of all the squiggles and shit in the background and get your letters straight before you do stuff like that. The O and P are alright, but im not feeling the T and E at all. Also maybe use a skinnier black marker.
  17. nero122

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    dont bother fillin it id just scrap it n go more simple. try less complicated letters n before inkin shit make sure it's clean n u can ink clean
  18. Drakula

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    Sorry for the bumping,but i want some solid crits for this.So I put it on the top of the page.
  19. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    opte lose all the squiggles in the background, go simler and get some structure

    drak your shits looking a lot better now u lost everything, maybe make your a abit longer and wider like the other letters it seems shorter and fatter

    trust your hands - go simpler, find some structure maybe check the new to graff thread

    hungr- that is so hot not feeleing the e but i love that m

    jers not liking that as much as your other stuff but i like where u could og with that style, work on the r tho

    soo crits before i ink and a wack as fuck R,
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  20. Gumdrop.Behemoth

    Gumdrop.Behemoth Senior Member

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    opte- go simplier man your not gettin any better by doin wat you doin

    seyar- r is chillin ink that bitch