Baze - im not really sure bout that.. id have to see it with other letters to giv it a proper crit.
Fube - your shits bangin.. im really liking it, im supprised your in the toy forums...
Enes - its not bad, just calm down with the circles...
Kazer - pretty sweet.. you sprayed that??

crits please... i didnt know what to write.

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this is not the kissing ass thread.
don't post if your gonna stay ills dope sick or hot in your post and thats it.
Give crits.
sizo- go simpler your letters are overlappin eachother too much lose the bubbles and 3d for now go simpler.
Dr.Kazer- good coloring but not your own idea so nothing really to crit.
Enesone- throw that away do basic block letters with bars go to the new 2 graff thread.
Seyar- raise the end of the R to come up more. Not bad though.
Fube- nice dive throwie.
Tenser- great sketches.
BOKAone- great fucking simples take notes kiddies....
Glyce-simpler......
esk- very nice nok piece great shading with yopur color pencil keep that shit coming maybe make the k and n more clear though.

 

heres more.. tell me wut u think. these are all month old ones

 

boka - sezer's right those are amazing simples keep improving,
eskoner- the coloring and letters are really good but too many arrows,
enes one - i think the second last one is the only one style you should improving on, or just go simpler...i don't know..
in only baze - that style looks like it would be cluttered and confusing...
everyone else go simpler and sketch more I suppose....

A few extensions and addons don't really flow here but whatever,

 

enes one - look I know simples are boring as fuck, they really are, but starting at simple straight bar letters, then bending the bars, then morphing the bars a little, then addons... this is a SACRED process, it's fundamental neccessity in learing graff, and only in 6 months or so will you truly understand what I'm saying, cause you'll look back to your shit that you thought was awesome and your gonna realise that it lacked flow, style, pizzazz , whatever, trust me, first you have the simples, then you wild style, then you have the power..........and I KNOW that I'll look at my shit soon and shake my head, it takes a long time to crawl out of the wackness stage

 

haha yea.. i have a whole old ass book of basic sketches.. normal block. but you are right.. i should just go back and practice block letters.. thats all i do in summer school is.. write graff, so since i got 4 weeks of summer school left ill be able to work on simple shit.. and ill post some pics too.. no one really said my shit was wack.. even some good ass writers from TMF said my shit wasnt that bad.. i guess they should have been more honest?.. so because of these complements, i never really payed attention to tha idea of simplicity

 

stop chatting in this thread or...

 

siZo, with the first sketch you should try and make it a little more symmetrical - there's quite a lot of negative space between the f and the a but hardly any between the a and the t. Also try starting off simpler.

Here's one I did today - crits please?
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1nOnly Baze: i like this style its dark, and thats what i like in pieces.
ENES.ONE: looks cluttered maybe it just needs color. go back to your month old style i like it better.
EasyMac: easy mac i think its good. even with all of the extensions. you did good with the bg.

i tookk some ppls advice with my throw. ignore the bad drop shadow. when i outlined it with a sharpie i fucked it up. it looked better in pencil.
crtiz please.

 

yea .. i always fuck up when i outline shit in sharpies. .. can i get some feedback on this one though.. ignore the colors.. a lil kid colored it when i wasnt looking..

 

dont be ashamed of your colors!

i really like that S. but the N isn't very defined and and could easily be mistaken for a different letter in my opinion.

it also seems like the middle vertical line seperating your E goes up too far.

maybe try something like this?
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this one too.. this is what happens when people get bored

 

the whoel page is pretty cool, bt the circle throws are kinda weird
dont like em so mch

 

hoopblah, you really need a new A. you should try to make it all flow like that B.

fube (first pic), its beautiful, but kinda generic. i would say now its time to add your own style to things.

baze, i think that style is pretty nasty. in a good way. like 666 kinda nasty. i like it.

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^^^Lord help me....*-_-

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trippin! (don't crit this. XD)

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realized how ridiculous this looked and decided to stop.

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its weird to think ive filled like 3 1/2 books and i still fuckin suck. ha.

 

haha thanks GEKS, but what about this circle throwup.. ignore the letters in tha black fills..

 

yea.. my "S"'s always kill shit.. alright one more then im done..

 

i like the top left one

scab- for the first one work on the a and b to make them match the s and c
the last one is the best imo

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think this is worse than my last sketch i posted
oh well