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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    Bumping all this shit.
    good idea fube.

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    Had to bump it's d_g's woman.
    Nice simples work on the middle of the A though.
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    Good shit hester nice euro style now all you need to do is some easter egg fills.
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    God damn.
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    keep playing with your letters borg your coming around nicely now that you decided to stick to one style.
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  2. thesilentvandal

    thesilentvandal Banned

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  3. ENES.ONE

    ENES.ONE Senior Member

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    here guys critique this one.. its when all of the tags and shit on it are so horrible.. but tell me what you guys think aa130.ac_images.myspacecdn.com_images01_19_l_18757410c364c7e1ce74094895495d71.png
     
  4. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    ENeS one- go simpler. end of story block letetrs look at the ESKA piece in my last post do shit like that. Because this just looks like some jumbled pipes.
     
  5. ENES.ONE

    ENES.ONE Senior Member

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    alright.. thnx.. ill do on like that and post it
     
  6. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    enes - it just looks like spagetti on a plate lol listen to sezr go simpler

    sezer -feeling the character on the demise sketch , that rip waster peice is ill too, the E looks kinda out of place tho dunno why maybe cuz thw top part overlaps

    morn - nice n clean man good work, maybe just lose the random extension from bottom of the O

    silent vandal - i dunno imknda not a fan of euroish styles so i cant say i like it, but do what you like its for you, maybe just fix the R tho
     
  7. N.O.T.E

    N.O.T.E Senior Member

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    ay sezer that waster piece is soo dope, much props for that
    bumps for anymore crits
     
  8. ENES.ONE

    ENES.ONE Senior Member

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  9. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    geometry aye?
    what did i just say simpler.
    ase- the letters are nice without the extensions keep that shit up.
     
  10. kelio

    kelio Senior Member

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    hungr: your style is so dope. and yeah i believe you did kill it with the circles. still nice though.
    BORG: so dope, tht green outline made it just fucking pop. but i would put an extension on the bottom left of your o.
    ENES.ONE: go simpler to cluttered. just dont flow.

    new character still in its fucking with it mode. just the basic idea.
    critz please.
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  11. -GEKS-

    -GEKS- Elite Member

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    shit i got a lot to crit to not get beat down by mods
    hmm
    enes-(graph paper piece) pretty good, sorta weird lookin with all the weird add ins, still like it
    NOTE- dont like the thing on the a so mch, still a dope piece
    Borg- so clean, dont like letters mch tho, too many extensions for me
    sezr- dope, not mch for me to say
    tech- nice coloring and everything, letters are a little weird

    heres one i did for tech
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    edit: please note my cool circoit board effect
     
  12. exhale

    exhale Senior Member

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    kelio are the things on the far left and far right hands or teeth?
    geks maybe you overkilled with the techy lines?
    enes the 3d is messed up
    ase on the left top of the a maybe make it bend the opposite to the right?

    crits/tips?
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  13. -GEKS-

    -GEKS- Elite Member

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    the bottom extension on the s is kinda weird, i woold change it so it matches the c, c's and e's are basically shaped the same. besides that i like all of this

    kelio- idk, keep workin on it. its not really bad right now, its jst sort of sittin there. maybe draw it doin somethin or in a different pose. make it exciting
     
  14. litlchanman

    litlchanman New Member

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  15. -GEKS-

    -GEKS- Elite Member

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    not really feelin any of it cept the 3d on the last piece
    go simpler, there isnt a lot of letter strctre in those pieces
     
  16. IwriteNASR

    IwriteNASR Senior Member

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    borg-shits progressin by each sketch not much to crit that i see
    tech- feelin it but id make the h a lil bigger
    edward- last ones my favorite nice simples
    enes-you prolly dont wanna here this but i say go simple and dont worry bout fills or details yet worry bout letters
    hester- nice shit love euro
    geks- not a fan of the "circuit board fill"
    tryin different style...[Broken External Image]:http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/9924/nasr45646ve5.jpg
    crits..
     
  17. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    ai41.photobucket.com_albums_e276_DannyHartu_Picture233.jpg

    this would make a sick sticker.

    btw when we say do simples. this is what we mean. nice.
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  18. -GEKS-

    -GEKS- Elite Member

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    WTF HOW CAN YOO NOT LIKE THE CIRCOIT BOARD FILL
    lol jp
    hmm fix that n and its weird bmps they are not good
    i woold close the a, looks fnny, bt thast jst me
    work on the r, i dont really kno how to explain it bt that r is weak
     
  19. exhale

    exhale Senior Member

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    bump for more crits and tips on how to improve please


    the eska simple is nice
    the sticker looks real fresh i like the s
     
  20. EsKoNeR!!

    EsKoNeR!! Elite Member

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    some of mr konkers sketches and such
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