i actually like that sekt, feeling the flow and the colors and geks i think the first one would be better if you could do the pencil strokes really fast..it looks like you took too much time to outline it which usually makes the lines not as fine messing around with structure/addons/shitty characters [Broken External Image]:http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/5/0701072250co8.jpg
wiser the 3d on the top of the s looks a bit off and you e is weird, I think it would look better lower case. [Broken External Image]:http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/8292/005ez7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/1690/009po9.jpg Been to lazy to write out my whole name lately so all you get is AS First was my first try at something more complicated.
thanks guys for the complament nd yea SOU i like yur work homie but i think the second piece would look better colored different but its still pretty kool
i like yur E and yur S but yur R has too many extensions and the arrow on the J is wierd how it goes around liek taht
MORNE - thats looking a whole lot better than the ones you were posting earlier, the only thing that i might suggest is that you make the top half of the R end at the same point as the bottem leg of the R. i hope that made sense
morne - thicken up the letters some and your good. silentvandal - looks good, lots of bubbles though crits for me?
jers i think yur j would look alot better without that loop arrow thing but still good work nd morne try keeping all your bars the same width nd dude keep at it yull get it soon
Scouse-Everything about it is wrong.Get rid of the lumps and just start with the basics so you can know how each letter works.A prime example of why you need to use this technique would be the E.
Sey- I like the throwie, any specific colors in mind? Scouse- Sorry but that's gross looking, the U doesnt need all those things on the right side and you could of done more with that E [Broken External Image]:http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/4236/img5538uf8.jpg I made it more basic and worked on my structure a bit, I think i did a good job on the 3d too.
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View attachment 286807 Exchange with Bazer.Couldn't fit the R onto the paper.It didn't come out too good,but oh well. View attachment 286808 Just added a cheech wizard character and a green forcefield(not pictured cuz i scanned this in last night and did the forcefield today) to this older piece as people said I needed to fill the gap between the A and the R.