Rave - Love this shit man, Just the Karak doesnt really go along with the piece. Its too cartoony for it.
i dont like the last one.. after 3 months of wanting a name change, i might actually do it. first sketch. i feel like this is much more..me. crits? comments? thumb points? yay? nay? View attachment 287890
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did my post get deleted? *suspicious* on the first pic..um the e looks like cope's e. so ya might wanna change that. i dont like the karak that much, i like the feet, maybe add some elephant toes? i think lose the bandaid..umm experiment with the teeth. crits on mine?
looks alright im not feeling the end on every letter or the random arrow other than that getting better
do simple block letters with out extensions for now man, itll help alot. also work on your preportions the arrow on the e is way to small for every other part of the word
Lesr... thats me really toy me [Broken External Image]:http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/5594/picture001ko4.jpg Crits please?
are you on crack? that looks nothing like copes E [Broken External Image]:http://www.citynoise.org/upload/16048.jpg
NOTE nice and clean man, so here are some recent sketches from me View attachment 287922 View attachment 287923 View attachment 287924 View attachment 287925 View attachment 287926
honestly, right now it needs a lot of work. but, i dont know if youve heardof sky 5 but he used to be here a lot and give a lot of advice. one thing he told me, was that for a long time after having simples down, he sucked. and was really wack. but its alright because after awhile youll get shit sorted out and become pretty tight, like him. hah. anywyas, i think you sh0ould keep going with this. dont be scarred to do soemthing funky. and if people say it sucks it doesnt mean drop the idea, just maybe leave it out for a few months and revisit it. ive done that a lot and am still no where near a difinitive style. if someone has a flick of sky? itd be nice if youd post it.
Word up, like a coffee cup...hehe I say that a lot. Anyways, yeah I sucked really bad up until 4-5 months ago and I still suck, and I've been writing for a year and a half-two years. Although I never did simples I looked at some tutorials sky did and it helped me a lot, it taught me how to construct letters with bars and shit like that so, yeah. But, for a while you won't have a "definitive" style and it will be very monotonous and bland, but just keep playin' with shit, ya dig?
am i on my way to a basic style sume...like this izm ... View attachment 287940 View attachment 287941 View attachment 287942 View attachment 287943 if someone like Sume , Trash Uuuuh say if i have then that would be soo koolio... ugh keep it up yall too !